Love the implacable consumption machine! This is a really easy-to-read one, I could definitely see myself running this! Here is my feedback:
+ Layout is really great overall, clear and distinct flow.
+ writing is concise, well-edited clear
- This might be a bit too linear, a lot of the branching paths feel a bit redundant/without purpose,
- Saves and damages could be bolded to provide more emphasis/ make them stand out.
- Kronos itself definitely doesn't need stats.
- The monster statblocks feel like they should be on the back side of the outer sheet, or the page with the locations.