Nicely written with great attention to perspective and detail. Well done!

Well written. I like the branching choices and how much content there is. Breaking it into parts was also a really good call, and helped me grasp where it was headed without tipping your hand completely.

Great work. I'm not a story guy in games, usually skip through text. But not really possible with this type of game lol. Sitting down to actually read, it is a cute story and well written. The mechanics all worked well for me except there is something with twine games that keeps your place even on page reload. So to start again you need to relaunch the game from the itch page. 

Neat little story haha I eventually got old to senescence I liked the way you made the words go purple once I been there before and how there was dragons to fend food off for a sheep snack and raising a family etc. Overall very good story I like it haha :)

Nice little Twine story, I enjoyed the characters! Perhaps you could check out my game, even though the action between the characters happen much slower and less directly than in this game. But good job on the writing!

Wow! Well written and genuinely moving. No easy thing.

I enjoyed this immensely.

Really well-written! I found one or two typos, but for a game jam that's to be expected haha. I really liked the subtle world-building.

It would have been easy to write a story like this and have it be generic and uninteresting, but I honestly really enjoyed this. 

I loved the story and your capability of creating a game so good with so simple tools! Great job!

Really well done story.  I got sucked into it quickly and played it through to the end.  Well written, only one typo I could see, nice balance of reading & choices...  Good job!