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A jam submission

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Spinners are Ouroboros too!
Submitted by Zaiks (@martinhindenes) — 1 hour, 24 minutes before the deadline

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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Mechanic#44.2634.263
Technical#93.5263.526
Story#143.2113.211
Music#203.4743.474
Atmosphere#213.5793.579
Overall#213.5793.579
Sound Effects#263.2633.263
Theme#373.2633.263
Graphics#752.9472.947

Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

this is an amazing game, the atmosphere is awesome, the kind-of story is awesome, everything is amazing :D

Developer

Thank you Sinci1! Glad you liked it! :)

(+1)

nice atmosphere! i didnt expect that type of gameplay :D

Submitted(+1)

dude, the best Jam's game i played until now, i just loved the mechanics and the atmosphere, really good sound and music choices, really cool concept that you thought.

Developer

Thank you Deono! It means a lot! I had to swap the music right before the deadline because I missed the rule about no paid assets. But I'm actually more happy with this free music. :)

Submitted(+1)

charming game to play. if you need some time to think.

Submitted(+1)

What can I say, wow that was an experience! The atmosphere is fantastic and the music fits it perfectly! I'm glad you uploaded a fix tot he "You need skill to be quick" level cos I struggled with that one, when I got past it I immediately died and went back! Really cool little experience with very simple graphics!

Developer(+1)

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it, and that my fix was of help. :)

Developer (2 edits)

Hi all! I uploaded an easier version of the game on my website:

https://marhin.com/loading-please-wait/

All I did was tweak the letters in the 'You need skill to be quick' level.

Note: This does not count as my jam entry! I just want to give people a chance to see my full game. :)

Submitted(+1)

Amazing game. It has such a unique feel and mechanic. I see I'm not the only one who found it extremely difficult. :) I got stuck on the one about needing skill and stopped there.

Developer(+1)

Thank you rk3Omega! I don't blame you :)

Will tweak and re-upload so people can enjoy the full game.

Submitted(+1)

Holy crap this is the coolest concept Ive seen so far! Its so unique and the narrative is very interesting! amazing man. Just reduce the difficulty a bit?

Developer(+1)

Thank you! I so wish I had time to playtest more. Didn't realize how difficult that McDonalds level was because I got project blind and was short on time. I will adjust the difficutly and upload again once the rating is over!

Submitted(+1)

This game is difficult man. Apparently I need my skill not only to be quick but also accurate, I died a lot in that level, which I believe other people will also have a hard time passing. I couldn't make it beyond that (I would love it if you have a cheat code so I can see more of the game) but Im really pleasant with what I have played. Super fun and innovative. Who thought the UI texts and tutorials could be something to get rid of to proceed in the game! This game certainly has a great potential to be released, very well done Zaiks!

Developer(+1)

Thank you, that means a lot! Yes, I was pressed for time and mostly playtested myself, so it's easy to become blind to the difficulty. I agree that that's the hardest level, so I should have moved it further into the game. Wish I had time to add more levels, you only missed like 4. No cheat code unfortunately, but it's possible to pass that level just by moving the mouse very fast, without expanding.

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

ahhhhh I see, Im actually on Tim's stream, I'll post that advice and let's see if he can pass that level xD

Edit: he made it!! Yay!

Developer(+1)

Yes! It was cool to see him play it on stream, love that the intro scene got him. :)

Submitted(+1)

i like the idea too, maybe more levels instead of getting stuck in 1 level but all in all, a relaxing game

Submitted(+1)

I like the idea.  But on one screen that I could not get, I started feeling sick, lol.

Submitted(+1)

Really like gameplay but got bored since it's kinda difficult.