This game is really cool! At first I didn't understand what to do but then it clicked on me and understood. Really nice mechanics!

Love the artwork! Great job!

Great game, good story and really nice art. The puzzles were a bit frustrating because the time limit and the lot of stuff that were going on, but because it is a short game, I think it was necessary to give the player a decent challenge. Well done and congratulations for your entry! :)

Excellent job making a compelling puzzle game while weaving in a narrative about a really tough topic. I had a blast playing this game and thought deeply while doing so. A winning combination in my book.

Creative blend of narrative and speedy puzzles. You even got some nice gameplay details in there light indicators for the next spawn point. The whole thing also had a great look to it. Going to have to come back later and try some other endings :)

Very cool. It's like a rougelite/speedrun game. I appreciate difficult games, but I'd also suggest an "easy mode" for players like me who are more invested in the story.  

Excellent work! Hope you do a follow-up! 😀

Nice work on the narrative, it's always good to see someone work on story since most of us forget to haha. I thought it played well but an idea for future might be to start the game paused and let the player pick their own spawn location before unpausing, then after they die, repeat that loop? Longer lifespan, or varying lifespan for each spawn location would open up a lot of puzzle possibility for you too :) Good work!

Felt sorry for blaming the 3 year old for just wanting icecream.  Nothing wrong with that,  lol.  Played and enjoyed the game until I got stuck to where I was dying like every 2 seconds and there was no hope of me reaching the next goal.  After dying like 100 times i gave up.  Well done

very original take on the theme, the art, music and story worked well together. it took me a while to figure out how it worked, since it was so very fast paced, nice work

It sure has stellar artwork! And while the dialogue was dry in some places, it did give me a few laughs.

The mechanic of multiple spawn points has some amazing potential. Dying repeatedly for a respawn in a specific place was a bit tedious, even with the instant respawn button - but it could absolutely work in a game where respawning at any of the points can give you progress.

I guess end 1 is if you stay?

I had really fun playung the game! Thank you! And if you don't mind to play mine, I would appreciate that :P Well if you haven't yet :D I can't remember anymore... It all gets blurry after 90 games rating :D

And the artwork is amazing too!

Super good! I loved the game! And since I got ending 2, I think there are multiple endings? Nice done really, super polished, nice gameplay, nice story. Loved it

Excellent Game! Loved the visuals and audio and the puzzle aspect, the constraint of a very short lifespan per spawn and respawning from different locations during the same playthrough worked really well,  level design showed off some good examples of varying spawn points as tactical advantages for different objectives. dialogue was clever and humorous. Smart move having spacebar force an instant respawn, helps with player patience. With more dev time I could see some definite potential in varying the lifespan or pickups to do so, maybe dependency chains between the objectives also for some nonlinearity in each overall task (and of course boss fights, wakka wakka!). Very well done, played all the way through. 

It took me a while to understand it but once I did I was able to get to Ending 2! Woot. Good job on your submission, I liked the art quite a bit! The concept is good, I'd love to see where it goes if you continue working on it!

EDIT: Sorry for the double post.

woha! that was a wild ride! thank you for that thought-ful and -provoking experience!
the art was wonderful - especially the character portraits were top notch! Hades better watch out!
the gameplay was quite good as well and natural fit to the story. but it was freaking hard as well!
i guess the learning curve was pretty steep because of that narrow window of opportunity each time, but I enjoyed the world and story so much, that i endured and I'm glad I did. It did feel quite rewarding in the end.
super impressive entry - you should be very proud.

The art for this is absolutely gorgeous. Everything from the game assets in the top down mode to the close-up art of the characters and the design of the page itself. I felt that the game was a bit too hard for me. I did make it to the 3rd or 4th level, but I found that I barely had time to register where I had spawned before something killed me.

You happened to be reviewing the games that I was reviewing, so I figured I'd give yours a go as well. I love the story and the gameplay so much! "We don't have enough development time for that" made me actually laugh out loud. Maybe the timer was a little fast? That could be my only feedback, because sometimes I'd catch a corner or not move fast enough and then I'd have to wait for the whole rotation again. But overall, really awesome job!

This is well crafted. I enjoyed the story, it seems like it tells the solemn story of a person fighting agoraphobia. It felt like something the right mostly faced, it is very engaging. The art was beautiful, I really enjoyed the hand drawn aesthetic of the characters. The music and sound both played very well into the setting. The mechanic was nice but jarring. It took me a second to get my bearings at each level, while I just bounced around start positions. When I got the hang of it it was a nice fun puzzle. Awesome Job, I really enjoyed this one. 

It's tooo haaaaard! Hahaha :D I'm a terrible gamer, honestly. Don't take my word for it. I was dying on average once every 0.5 seconds on the second level with the watching eyes. It was like a drum machine of death sounds. 

I love the intro, the music and the story. Personally I liked it more than the actual game, but understand full well that.. well then it'd just be a story, right? :D The art is really nice, the mechanics were smooth, it looked amazing. So all positives apart from my personal experience that I just suck at the game.

I did notice 1 thing, accidentally - the music stops when you drag the page down by clicking the middle mouse button. (my scroll wheel is broken so this is how I go about.. it'll likely go unnoticed otherwise)

Well done, thanks for your submission!