Really nice game, and a fun concept, I really like the art.

platforming is really smooth although the jump felt a bit floaty,

If you're too close to a wall you could do infinite jumps which means the use of the ghost is underutilized, but idk if that was intended. 

If you draw the line too close to the bottom you lose.

all in all, I really like the mechanic and think it could be nice if expanded upon.

Good job!

Great job! I love the ghost mechanic. The camera switching between screens is a bit nauseating. The movement feels smooth, and I like the slow-mo effect when drawing while the character is in mid-air.

That was an innovative gameplay. Good work.

Love a puzzle game with a bit of creativity to the solution. Loved the pacing & the mood. Great Work!

Really cool game! The movement feels right and the ghost mechanic is really well done. I figured out I could kind of "wall jump" using the jump button repeatedly to climb walls. Maybe that could be another movement mechanic with the ghost lines. I can see a lot of level design potencial with this!

Interesting use of the ghost. Found out I can bypass a few areas without its help by just pressing jump to continuously go up.

I really liked the trampoline mechanic - felt really nice and responsive and chaining a few good trampoline jumps felt awesome! There were a few times where I wasn't sure if I could move vertically downwards through the level without dying, but thankfully each reset made it low stress so I could progress and finish. Good stuff guys!

I appreciate that you made your core mechanic not super hard to handle.
As someone who isn't that good at platformers I was able to complete it without problems and enjoy it start to finish while comfortably interacting with the many required uses of your main mechanic.

When I encountered similar mechanics in jam games they are often quite janky but you managed to make it actually pleasant to use the drawn lines and their springboard effect.

I would have loved to see the asylum aspect being more present.
Some phrases written on the walls or so would have made the story way more clear. Right now it's only really portrayed via the description of your project / submission page. Also it would have given the world I traverse as a player more meaning.

The game music is very good, the main menu visuals are just amazing and the level design is good too. The overall game is very polished and nice. Rated it! If possible do rate and play my game :)

good and funny game

please play my game too

Took me an embarassingly long time to figure out that the button prompt to activate ghost is supposed to be Shift... I did not recognize that symbol XP

In general I had fun I think. The story lol damn that's dark. The concept is very creative and has much potential to become a puzzle platformer if you add more mechanics to interact with it.

The sound ambient fits the atmosphere of the game so well although it is just a simple ambient music. The SFX also feels good.

Some criticisms:

• Weeeelll looks like it was just me but as mentioned previously it took me an embarassingly long time to realize that symbol is shift. What do you think of a more straightforward design of rectangle with the word "SHIFT" at the center?
• The level design feels... random imo. Except for the first three screen the level looks without purpose other than as a filler between the start and the ending. Perhaps the sporadic nature of the terrain is purposeful to show that it is just hallucination? Still though... A less random, more purposeful level design, although unfortunately I cannot elaborate in detail how that might look like, may be something you want to put into consideration. Perhaps the level should highlight how the mechanics you created can be used in interesting ways; or when it comes to routes and branches you may want to be more purposeful as to what kind of experience you want to give the player. Must admit this is hard stuffs so sorry if I cannot really elaborate clearly.
• More regarding level design... some screen transitions put me onto a cliff. Well it's not that huge a deal since when I die I restart very close but still... some screen transitions put me onto a cliff that immediately drops me down.
• The tiles themselves are good... but just seeing one type of tile throughout such a long journey without anything to break the monotony feels... well somewhat monotonous. A little decoration here and there wouldn't hurt :3
• Just a confirmation... wall jumping is not within your intention right? You see... when I did not realize that I could activate my ghost using shift, I still tried to advance; but then I found out I could "double jump"... and then "triple jump"... and then I realized that I was simply wall jumping. I do not know what may have caused that bug but you may want to look into it. Using the wall jumping I could progress up until the screen before the ending.

That was a good ending , I laughed at all the "oofs" everytime my character died lol. Creating the lines was such a great addition to the game, loved it!

You have like the most unique concept I have seen yet!

Loved it! And I look forward to more games y'all are ready to make :)

Very cool game. Was I supposed to be able to wall jump?

Nice job

Love the concept of the ghost ! Great concept !

Really good work guys! I love the art style and the gameplay mechanics. Great use of music to set the mood and a cool little story too! It is really impressive how polished this game is. I know you are all super busy right now so well done for finding the time and smashing it out of the park! Can't wait to see what you come up with next. 

This is best game yet that I played in this game. Love how it needs the player to plan the jump and also the platform. Adding with the fitting ominous soundtrack, it is a true masterpiece. Keep it up!