A cool little game that some devs can relate to! I like the narrative and some humor. Explosion sound jumpscared me xD The pendrive was too small, but I somehow managed to find it. Game could have more interactive things and music, especially at part where you have to catch drawings.
It could be more polished, but it is still a good game for a first jam :)
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Luis - A game developer story's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
VISUALS | #19 | 2.161 | 2.161 |
OVERALL | #28 | 1.968 | 1.968 |
INNOVATION | #33 | 1.839 | 1.839 |
SOUNDS AND MUSIC | #36 | 1.806 | 1.806 |
THEME | #37 | 2.032 | 2.032 |
THE EXPERIENCE | #40 | 1.839 | 1.839 |
Ranked from 31 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
I love the art style.The narrative was interesting.The first stage was kinda difficult,but thanks to the Itch.io comments I got it.Maybe a short tutorial/one line of text would have been nice.Other than that the story is very unique and fun.
Love the optimism in the ending,I honestly didn't expect a happy ending xD
That was a unique entry. I loved the art style. I liked the narrative.
As per previous comment I would definitely work on some level design choices to help direct players to subconsciously know what to do
how do I play? I got the opening cutscene then the green arrow disappeared after a set number of text prompts, so upon pressing the red X the text box closes and I can move my character, that's basically it. what do I do then?
I enjoyed the game. It was a bit frustrating not knowing where to click... then I just approached it like on of the old point and click adventure games... scan the screen w/ the mouse looking for clues. Great humor, I did actually laugh enough that my wife wanted to see what I was playing.
I really liked your art style! This game was fun and the narrative funny! I also loved the two endings. I just had a jumpscare at the bomb sound, I had my headphones at the moment XD
Good job in finishing this game! ^^
Great complete storytelling game! Nice artwork and music. Played both ends unintentionally :). I really enjoyed it, altough the first two minutes were frustrating because I didn't know what to do so I clicked on everythink and nothing happend :D
The art was really nice and the music aswell. The bomb sound was a bit too loud. I forgot the girls name first time I played so I had to restart, lol. I played both endings, there were only two, right? I liked that you first showed the story in black and white and then you played what you just saw. I would like to see your art in upcoming games (and music if you did it).
I rated it, hope you get the standing you want!
Thanks for the feedback :D I appreciate it!!
At the end of the Jam I'll change the volume of the bomb sound.
Do you think it'd be a good idea to add a reset button when you've to write down the name? so it's not necessary to manually restart the game?
Anyway the endings are two ahaha so you've 100% completed the game!! <-- well done ;)
I had a good laugh while playing. Good job!! Also the art was spot on, i'm impressed.
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