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A jam submission

Falisar Speranza Brackeys 2022.1View game page

Submitted by DeeRaghooGames — 9 minutes, 15 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Audio#3873.2083.208
Theme#4013.3193.319
Graphics#4453.4723.472
Overall#5493.0743.074
Fun#6502.9032.903
Game Design#6912.9312.931
Innovation#7902.6112.611

Ranked from 72 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How does you game fit the theme?
it is about a man that is in a world where he is trying to reach "gold" that is not real, there is a fake ending and a Real ending

Did you write all the code and made all the assets from scratch?
I made the code from scratch and used pre-made assets some of which I modified

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Submitted

Cool one, the controls were a bit off but it wasnt too much of an inconvinience

Developer

thanks for playing and your comment, I have been working on the controls  and a lot of other suggestions for my updates after the game jam. hope you  play it when it is finished.

Submitted

-Nice game! Indeed the teleporting was a bit confusing at first but got the hang of it later :) Would love to play it after the update

Developer

thanks for playing and your comment,

I  agree that the teleport is confusing if you try to figure out where you are because  of the invisible walls that block  you from going in a particular direction, I have tried to remedy that for my release after the jam. it is almost ready.  I am just looking for was to make the boss fight more fun and fair.

Submitted

Very cool,

I felt that the player was a bit too heavy on movement/jumps on the platforming levels, and I think the viewport should allow the player to see more platforms at some points.

The beginning is a bit confusing for me😂

as you fall right away then you teleport to the start of the game, and I was trying to figure out if this was all meant to be this way.

So I think  a nice transition between different levels/scenes would be nice,

The concept is pretty nice though,

Good Job!

Developer(+1)

thanks for playing , and your comments, it is a great Idea to have a transition scene for the teleport start of the stage. I realize that the teleport is confusing . h

Hopefully I  have fixed that now, I have implemented your suggestion, I am new to Unity but this jam has taught me a lot thanks to great suggestions like yours.  I look forward to your suggestions if you would play my updated version at the end of the Jam and also I look forward to  playing games that  you too create in the future as well .

Submitted

This was a cool game! It almost felt like a mix between Unfair Mario and a metroidvania. All the platforming felt good; the only thing I would critique in that area is that the jump feels a little too weighty. I really liked the exploration aspects too, with discovering flowers being linked to progress. It all came together well, and I think you did a great job!

Developer(+1)

thanks for playing and your feedback, I am taking all the suggestions I get and making an updated release after the jam.

I look forward to  playing games that  you too create in the future as well .

Submitted

Graphics reminded me of Kingdom: New Lands a bit. Movement felt quite smooth, liked that death is rewarded with a quick respawn (would have been tedious otherwise).

Thanks for making this!

Developer

thanks for playing and your feedback.  I am still working to improve the game and I am releasing it after the jam is done.  hope that  you give it a play trough. 

I look forward to  playing games that  you too create in the future as well following for updates on your game Motivated reasoning   too.

Submitted

Lovely graphics and the music fit perfectly to the game! Although, the camera could be implemented a little better at moments. Specifically, when platforming I barely see what's beneath me so I have to guess where I'll land. Anyways, nicely done! :) 

Submitted

Liked the art style as well. Would love to see more options to be able to see what is fake and what isn't :).

Did you create the music or was it an asset? 

Developer

thanks for playing and your suggestions.  I am working on a update release with  all the suggestions that I get,  you could follow me for the updates if you like.  I did not create the music it was an asset I got on OpenGameArt, links are on the game page

Submitted

It was a little confusing that I got teleported all over the level without any warning, maybe designing it continuously would be an improvement :) But I loved the beautiful art style and very fitting music. Check out our game too and rate, please :)

Developer

thanks for playing and your suggestion, you are so right , the teleport is very jarring , I will take your suggestion into consideration and implement it in my updated release after the Jam, please follow me for the update.  I will definitely check out your game !!!

Submitted

Really like that art style. This game is sweet!

Developer

thanks for playing and commenting , 

I also rated your game !

Submitted

False Hope is an excellent game,
where reality is not necessarily what is seen.
Was this gamejam in October? 
Because it feels like Halloween.

I think the art was beautiful,
I also loved the music.
The whole vibe was super medieval,
and the background were really scenic.

I really enjoyed playing your game,
the sword was a lot of fun. 
I think this was a great entry,
I commend you on a job well done :D 

Developer

thanks for playing and that awesome poem. You Rock Sir !

Was this gamejam in October?  Because it feels like Halloween.

LOL  that was the first thing I taught of when I I was looking  at the art and picked the boss.
Submitted

Good game! I found the platforming a bit hard. Maybe a slightly higher jump would solve that? Either way, the game looks really nice, and it's got a good take on the theme!

Developer

thanks for playing,  I am still working on the game, I did some changes to the character controls and other stuff to the game but taking all the suggestions I got so far.  I will release the game updates after the jam is Finished. I also rated and comment on your awesome game!

Good Game. Like the plattforming theme. Good Work :)

Developer (1 edit)

thanks for playing . I am happy you liked it !

Submitted

Nice game i gonne rate can you do that for me to?

Developer

thanks for playing.

I played and rated  you game also.

Submitted

That ending was pretty clever. I like how you have to do the non-obvious thing to beat the boss and get the good ending. It also works well thematically; the game is about the player character's greed, but you beat it by being generous.

The jump feels pretty floaty and awkward. The game isn't strictly a platformer, so it's not the worst thing, but it would have been nice if it felt better. Another thing that didn't feel great was how quickly you lose all your health when you touch an enemy.

Took me a couple of tries before I figured out that the checkpoint was a checkpoint. The fact that it's to the left of where you start that area means I never touched it by accident, and it didn't look like a checkpoint.

Developer

Thank you so much for playing and your comments. OMG you really got IT.  that is what I was attempting to show in the game. You got the  Good ending !!!

I have been taking everyone's suggestions, and I implemented coyote time , Jump buffer, made the player more heavy  "weighty" with variable jump height. added a duck,  added more feed back for the fake platforms, and I am adding a few more levels, also fixed the arrows that constantly face the player .

I will take your suggestion and make the checkpoint more obvious since I am adding more levels, also the player health i have been experimenting with more health, less damage and Invincible frames to see what feels the best.

I am also looking for Ideas on how to create a better boss fight, been watching mega man videos on YouTube. I might do something like your boss fight ,  but I will have to make the Scare Crow fly. (well there are stranger things in the game ) Do you have any suggestions ?

I am planning to release the update after the Jam is finished and would really appreciate if you game it a play through when  I am done

please follow me  for the updates. this has been the most encouraging  and insightful review I have received, thanks !

Submitted(+1)

I'm happy I was able to help with my feedback. I'd be happy to play the update once its posted.

My design process for creating boss fights is finding ways to test the player's familiarity with the game's mechanics in fun/creative ways. For your game, I would think about what gameplay mechanics you want to test the player on and work from there. Personally, I think there's a lot of potential in incorporating fake platforms into the boss fight (especially since you're adding more feedback to them).

Best of luck to you in your game dev endeavors!

Developer

really great suggestion.  thank you so much !

Developer

Hey check out this dev log play through that I made for my game when you get a some time .

Submitted

Finally got around to watching your dev log (sorry it took a couple of days...). Congrats on your placement in the jam! Seems like you had a good time and learned a lot. Looking forward to that improved version you've been working on.

Thanks so much for the shoutout! That was really nice of you :D

Submitted

Fun game :) Lovely art style and cool music. Well done! 

Submitted

I liked the art and music but gameplay and controls were a bit hard for me.

Developer(+1)

thanks for playing,  I still working on the game and updating it with all the suggestions that I am getting, i will release it after the Jam

Submitted

Interesting game! I liked the title and I appreciate the effort of making a trailer!

Developer (1 edit)

thanks for playing,  I have been watching  a channel on you tube  on 18 century cooking and googled  18 century languages  and I ended up finding  Lingua Franca it was a trade language that was used back then I think.   I just used the words for fake and hope.  check out the link below

https://minds.wisconsin.edu/bitstream/item/3920/glossary4.pdf

(1 edit)

Awesome game, nice work

Developer

thanks for playing.

Submitted

Graphics are super cool! Audio cool too! I think, that miss feedback to see what is real and not real. Good job!

Don't hesitate to try our epic boss battle!

Developer

thanks for playing, I am still working on the game and taking all the suggestions into consideration I got some great ideas and have implemented feed back for the fake platforms and improved the character controller.  I will try your boss fight.

Submitted

Great sprite work. The end boss is a real punisher, couldn't beat it but still a fun fight. I like the implementation of the theme with platforms and floors being fake, but some way to tell what's fake and what's not more accurately would be good. Like, the floors/platforms disappear or become translucent or turn a different color or something once you jump or fall through them. Good job.

Developer (1 edit)

thanks for playing and your suggestions that is a great help.

there is an easy way to skip the boss fight entirely. I will post a video on the last day of the Jam

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