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A jam submission

Move In or Move OutView game page

Submission for IndieTales Game Jam 2021
Submitted by missingfox (@MissingFox1) — 1 hour, 26 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Relevance (Creative Expression of Theme)#443.8283.828
Aesthetic Flair (Graphics & Sound Presentation)#743.5863.586
Immersion (Gameplay & Storytelling Engagement)#922.9312.931
Overall#953.1553.155
Technical Excellence (Design & Engineering)#1752.2762.276

Ranked from 29 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

  • Heya, thanks so much for participating in the jam! I like this idea, creating the character of the grandma to inject some urgency. It was nice having split goals as well, and it definitely increased in difficulty as time went on, just because there was limited space. Graphics were good, but the soundtrack was top notch. Great work there. My gripes come from a couple of places, both implementation focused. First, I had some issues where the game would stick objects to my character, and I could no longer put them down or give them to sister, this broke the experience a bit. Secondly, I struggled a bit to understand when and why grandma was mad at first. The description on the game's page explains this, but in-game clarity around the cause and severity of her anger would be really appreciated. Break points like her anger boiling over (game over) should be really clear, but that last 5% was very ambiguous once you reached her red face. If she calmed down over time, this also would help show the state a bit more clearly. Perhaps a bar, timer or number next to her face throughout, or even just before the game over, would have been helpful.

Made by One or Two People

yes this was made by just me / us

All Original Content

yes everything was made during the jam

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Submitted(+1)

Love the sprite work and the concept really suits the theme! Got the same bug as others mentioned where the box was stuck above my head. Other than that, great job!

Developer

Thank you! :D

Submitted(+1)

Well, the table's color is a bit off

Developer

:o how did she get all the way over there? oh dear...

Submitted(+1)

You also can try to guess why table is outside and why gran isn't angry but some time already past).

You can walk out with player, enter level from the right and do some weird things that will kinda break game

Submitted(+1)

Cool Game! I had a bug where I had a box over my head at all times without holding it. I also found it hard to control the movement. But the art style is very cute and it was fun to play ^^

Developer

Thanks!!

Submitted(+1)

I run into bugs in 2 separate gameplay. First, the piano stuck on me. Second, I got piano, box and dresser stuck on me lol. Other than that, I quite enjoy the gameplay.

Developer

Ahh sorry to hear about the bugs. Thank you for playing though and hopefully I'll be able to fix all of them once the voting period ends xD

Submitted(+1)

Fun little unpacking. Nearly everything became a part of my character which I didn't mind but did found funny to see as I keep collecting more stuff to add to my character lol. Awesome work!

Developer

haha whoops! Thank you for playing :D

(+1)

I really enjoyed this playing this! It was fun to try and figure out where to push everything without getting stuck surrounded by different objects.  I had a little bit of a time trying to pick up objects at first but once I figured it out I also experienced the bug where I couldn't drop objects.  I really liked the art style that you went with and the music was a great touch too. 

Developer

Thank you I appreciate the kind words

Submitted(+1)

I really liked the art and music! I actually bugged the game by holding space and running into multiple objects, the last object I ran into would be the one that dropped, but everything else kind of just stuck to the player as if it was part of the sprite. Other than that, great job!

Developer

Thanks for the support! Yeah, I'm planning on addressing those bugs after the voting period ends :(

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

Nice music and art, i loved the concept and gameplay, tho i had some hard time picking stuff up
Keep up the good work!

Developer

Thank you for the feedback. Considering that almost everyone experienced bugs with picking up objects, I'm probably going to update it after the voting period ends XD

Submitted(+1)

I liked the style of the pixel art and the concept of the game, good job!

Developer

Thanks :D

Submitted(+1)

Great concept and a charming setting. I enjoyed it!

Developer

Thanks! I enjoyed your game as well :3

Submitted(+1)

This was a fun experience :) The artwork is amazing, and the music got stuck in my head after playing it. My only issue is that i had a hard time with picking up things, it seemed a bit buggy. Anyways, great job on this one ;)

Developer

I'm glad you liked the music! Thanks for the feedback I appreciate it!

Submitted(+1)

Awesome game! Really cute pixel art, soud effects and music are great aswell!
The gameplay works well and is intuitive. I really like the approach to the theme!


Nice job, this game is great!

Developer(+1)

Thanks! I appreciate it

Submitted(+1)

Awesome game love the concept but got stuck in a glitch when I played. Art was great as well.

Developer

Thank you for the feedback. Hopefully I will be able to resolve the glitches once the voting period is over :)

Submitted(+1)

Great game! Love the idea and the art was flawless. Unfortunatly, I got stuck in some bugs, but overall great job!

Developer(+1)

Thank you for the feedback and the kind words! I'm sorry that the bugs got in the way hopefully I will be able to resolve them after the voting period has ended...

Submitted(+1)

Great game, had a good time. I liked the graphics and the catchy music. Gameplay was simple and enjoyable. Some colliders seemed too big for the item itself. Picking/dragging was bit buggy, as seen below.



Developer

XDD yeah I was aware of those bugs, but I just didn't have enough time to fix them sadly. I'm trying to get faster at development so that hopefully I can submit a game jam game that is bug-free.

Submitted

Haha, all good. They were quite entertaining.  And no need to sweat about bugs really, can't ever get rid of them completely. 

Submitted(+1)

Nice game! Definitely enjoyed playing. I did get in a state where everything I grabbed got stuck to me near the end but it didn't stop me from completing the game.

Developer

Thank you for the feedback! Maybe I will address all the bugs after the voting period has ended. Fixing bugs take so much time haha

Submitted(+1)

really enjoyed the character and humor in this game. made me chuckle. also, the background music was super cool! great work.

Developer

Thank you for the kind words I appreciate it!

Submitted(+1)

Really Nice job with the art and especially the music! The game was funny, and i liked it! a little buggy, but so was mine!

Submitted(+1)

This game was very charming! The game play was simple enough to follow but was still challenging. Also the music was great :)

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