Amazing visual style and love the mix of visual and aural storytelling. Sometimes it was hard to hear the narration over the music and getting sent back to the start of the level felt punishing sometimes, but this was such a stunning game and everything worked together to deliver a great emotional experience. Great job! 

Profound. Definitely a must-play from this jam. I hope all is well with you. Great work. No critiques, I love the transition from falling off the world. The crumbling of the paper is a nice touch.

Go to a personal theme, love graphics like Binding of Isacc, start feeling really sad... And this all I can say. This game has a lot of meaning for the creators. Videogames can make feeling take a form and tell a story, can be anything at this game it's a prove of that. 

I really like this game! The platforming was fun and the art was great! I enjoyed learning more and more about the two characters and their relationship as the game went on. If I had one complaint, it would definitely be that the game can be needlessly hard at times. Though other than that, good game!

Very cool.
I am impressed with its audio and graphics.
I like this atmosphere.

Worth every emotional moment!

Really like the take on the theme and the art style. The voiceover was good, sadly I lost some parts due to the fact I was focused on the levels, subtitles would be a great addiction. Great work!  

Loved the game but the audios were a bit diff

What a beautiful game, great job!

Very interesting idea and well executed paper-artstyle. My main complaint would be that there are no subtitles. The voiceover was a bit hard to follow for me (as a non native listener) because it was pretty to concentrate on the music, the level and the voice at the same time.

Beautiful. Just, beautiful. 

My only note is that the voiceovers and the soundtrack are a bit loud compared to the rest of the audio. Subtitles could be a good addition as well.

Fantastic! Great work!

You're gonna make a grown man cry...
I love media! You can express your emotions via so many ways. Be it writting, drawing, making music, singing or... making games. I adore media that talks about real feelings that everybody of us has and it tickles that empathy even through a game. So with this, well done! You not only made a beautiful game underlined with a beautiful soft voice, but you also reached the heart of the player (in this case me, hehe) ^^

That was an emotional game. I loved how the final level is basically the first level, except everything went from sad and gloomy to happy and bright. 

This game is pretty awesome.  Please turn the girl talking up a little so we can here it a little better but other than that really cool

Beautiful game! I really enjoyed playing it! The story was very well put together and conveyed. The art style was really nice too! I noticed during the death animation you still have control of the character and the camera will still follow you. I think there could have been more checkpoints in the wedding level as well. Great work!

This game was great! It was like playing a video game in a book. But I did find a bug, when I died I can still the the bullets that shot me in front of the death screen paper. And those bullets would sometimes kill me again when I just spawned. Overall great game, art, and music! 

Sad rememberable story. It is fitting very well  the theme unstable.