Oh yeah this is great. The meandering yammering of the protagonists is super charming, the sprites are delightful and the conceptual structure of the pink film plot occurring during the filming of a pink film works really well for me. Maybe I'll finally get around to Looking for an Angel
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This was really arresting, both in visuals and prose. There's such a vivid and uncomfortable specificity to April's thoughts and dreams that I caught myself holding my breath more than once while reading. She's a character I'll be turning over in my head for some time.
I also want to shout out the ending. The understated, casual nature of the presentation makes it so so uncomfortable. I had to take a break from my list of jam games for the night just to spend more time thinking about it. Really impressive stuff
This was quite fun! The particular kind of misery during the sex scenes (especially early on) is interesting to pick apart, and the sprites are very expressive and carry a lot of weight despite relatively few variations. Also, Florance's bizarro combination of offhanded clueless transphobia and puppy dog eyes ended up being way more charming than I was expecting. A good time!




