Thank you so much for the feedback! I tried to write a story with mind control that still had room for gentleness and sweet moments. I'm glad you enjoyed it <3
You did an exemplary job! So much in the genre I find is just...cruel, almost, even when it's not trying to be? Or harsh, at least; so much about taking, about forcing, and I won't say there's no place for that - but there's a place for much more than that, too, and I'm delighted to have found more than that here! Thank you for making this!
Yeah, that's always something I've struggled with when looking for stuff with elements of mind control. It can so easily be cold and harsh, cruel even. Its fiction, so that can be sexy and fun, but I wanted to build a setting and a world that could house loving connections alongside horny mind control powers. Im so happy you liked it so much!!