Liked the color palette and art! and idea

The low resolution 3d realism style with the gray color really gives a nice touch to the ambience of the game , giving a depressed , dark vibe. The narrative of this game is very nice. The font are a little small if i dont have my glasses , i can barely see the text. 

The font definitely needs to be bigger. Even full screen I had a problem. Also the inconsistent text speed control was frustrating. I would come up with a universal control where while text is playing if you hold the mousebutton down it speeds up. Then once you get to the end of the text you have to release and then click to proceed to the next text. It is a balance between clickthrough and forced reading. If you are going to have a text only game more control of the text is necessary.

I would add more interactions beyond just find the question marks. Some sort of branching story or minigames would be a great addition.

Theme wise this game is excellent. It doesn't wallow as many depression themed games tend to. The use of the gray and the flashes of color are very relateable to my experience.

And of course, good job on the 3d modeling. It is a great presentation, and the occasional flickers of color do a great job of highlighting the breakthroughs.

Nice little story, I wish there was more to do and interact with. The character sliding when walking is because your walk speed is different then your animations' walk cycle, so you do have to be careful of that. Also, the movement of the character flipping is caused by taking the input and not the velocity to flip the character.  The animations were nice, though. I struggle with 3D animating, but yours was really good, well done.

You told the story very well, it's well paced and relatable and also really liked the symbolism of the use of colour here as well. as another comment says the text is a little bit small and I also think having some background music could add to the experience, like during the coloured sections. I also noticed there's a little bit of lag walking around the house, when you need to interact with things compared to when he's cleaned up, and I wasn't able to walk in the corner right of the window, even when the boxes were removed, but it didn't take away from the experience for me, I liked this one.

Ffor how short it is there is a lot of emotion and story into it, felt wayyy too at home lmfaooo. I really really love the story, i think its really accurate to the self improvement mindset being pit against depression (or atleast, how i interpreted it). Obviously, if it could be longer, I think the story and feelings alongside would be pushed even further (i think having more emphasis on shame could be interesting)

my only complaint is not being able to pet the cat lolol

Too relatable! good work putting this together, other than what people have already said I'll just just say the phong shading makes everything looks like plastic.

This is very impressive..the visuals especially.. although texts were a bit too small

Seems pretty story-centric, and I think the game format might actually be holding it back. This might work pretty well as a short film. As it's very story centered, the gameplay doesn't really exist. "The real gameplay is the friends we made along the way"

I like the approach but I didn't feel like I had many options, not even dialogue options but I don't usually play this kind of games and maybe I' m just not used to