Ffor how short it is there is a lot of emotion and story into it, felt wayyy too at home lmfaooo. I really really love the story, i think its really accurate to the self improvement mindset being pit against depression (or atleast, how i interpreted it). Obviously, if it could be longer, I think the story and feelings alongside would be pushed even further (i think having more emphasis on shame could be interesting)
my only complaint is not being able to pet the cat lolol