You told the story very well, it's well paced and relatable and also really liked the symbolism of the use of colour here as well. as another comment says the text is a little bit small and I also think having some background music could add to the experience, like during the coloured sections. I also noticed there's a little bit of lag walking around the house, when you need to interact with things compared to when he's cleaned up, and I wasn't able to walk in the corner right of the window, even when the boxes were removed, but it didn't take away from the experience for me, I liked this one.