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i didn't knew about snipe hunting , i think i saw it in some American cartoon once but didn't gave it more thought so learning its a real thing is interesting !
+ Points for using puffins in your intro.
- I had a hard time reading the hand written stuff, i do zoom in but the writing is so thin that it still is hard to read, i would recommended to use a bigger pen size.
-i was confused at first as i didn't saw a table for the body before i saw it was in the snipe adaptation under each number 2 letters each time. maybe this would need some rework as it doesn't read naturally.
The creature generation is novel, some of the adapations are sick as hell, and I like a number of the locations inside the facility! Some thoughts:
All told, I feel like there are a variety of improvements that could be made, but there's a lot of cool foundational elements here that I'd love to see expanded upon! Good work!