Modern myth is a fun take and is at the center of this adventure which is awesome. To take this up a notch, these are the things I would focus on:
- Readibility is tough: higher contrast between the background and text would go a long way, as would using fonts that are a little easier to read.
- Mechanics aren't clear in how to run this: Clear prosedures and reasons for the players to be there would go a long way.
- Colour palette is a lot; scaling it back and using fewer could really help.
Snipe generation mechanics are cool and another direction you could take this is a full monster creation tool kit, which would be dope as hell.