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A jam submission

Dorothy Has A Nice Day In Teslic YardView game page

Dorothy's on a SPECIAL MISSION. What might happen to her on her adventure???
Submitted by goopyb00py — 3 days, 7 hours before the deadline

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Dorothy Has A Nice Day In Teslic Yard's itch.io page

Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Kink#14.6674.667
Horny#24.4004.400
Narrative#83.7333.733
Overall#83.2073.207
Harmony#113.2003.200
Aesthetic#143.4003.400
Play#142.8002.800
Sound#211.3331.333
Stealth#232.6002.600
Novelty#232.7332.733

Ranked from 15 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

This was very kinky! Your descriptions of Dorothy becoming corrupted were very well written.

Submitted(+1)

The kink was so strong here I could seriously feel it even though it's not one I share :) The use of the repeated abstract items and the changing reaction to them was great.

(+1)

Oh my, I felt so bad and dirty and loose after playing this game. I really don't want to corrupt Neon, but it's… very satisfying 🤤.

Well done 👌

Submitted(+1)

Well, there's no way to hide the fact that this game has a very noticeable corruption kink indeed. It's certainly interesting, and I can't necessarily hide that I too have a thing for seeing characters get progressively more into-it (to some extent). 

Personally, I like the way the game is setup and the repetition of common elements and how they transmit Dorothy's change within their... awakening over time and I think the narrative and witting clearly transmit how corrupt they have become over time up to the very ending.

And, that pretty much sums it up! It's a great display of character and for what this is it serves the purpose just fine. I'd love to see something with a bit more depth to it though, if you ever set out do something among those lines! Cheers! 🐳

Submitted(+1)

Art is good! Like the aesthetic.

Could probably use a dubcon/ambiguous warning in the page description

Submitted(+2)

This was incredible!!! I genuinely loved this!! Great job!!

Submitted(+2)

Well done!! I really enjoyed the writing, and great use of the format! The repetitive elements as Dorothy loses herself are great, and the ending definitely had me going, "oh NO."

Developer(+2)

HEE HEE. The ending will have the characters in question going "oh YES", in no time at all, I assure you.