Beautiful and Good VN, considering its done with HTML, CSS and JavaScript, makes it just more awesome.
I think many people mention already.... Sound!! That would spice thewhole Game to another Level!
Solid Work, keep it up!
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Visuals | #7 | 4.412 | 4.412 |
Overall | #10 | 3.941 | 3.941 |
Originality | #16 | 3.941 | 3.941 |
Fun Factor | #40 | 3.118 | 3.118 |
Audio | #109 | 1.471 | 1.471 |
Ranked from 17 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Is your game a video game or a physical game?
video game
Was your game made solo or in a team?
Written and Developed by @drunksylvari, character art by @frostedinkillustrations
Did you use any third party assets, if yes what assets did you use?
n/a
Did you choose from one (or more) of the optional secondary themes?
Battery
Does your game contain 18+ content (Nudity, Gore, Language)?
no, but the character artists account name mentioned in the credits works mostly in 18+ NSFW content
Beautiful and Good VN, considering its done with HTML, CSS and JavaScript, makes it just more awesome.
I think many people mention already.... Sound!! That would spice thewhole Game to another Level!
Solid Work, keep it up!
*R34 stranded search...* oh i mean, nice game i like the story and graphic style of the game ! the screen filter fits a lot in the gameplay, i dont like a lot the Graphic novels but this one was interesting to play well done!
Great visuals and story. I especially liked the implementation, is this HTML5?
I would love to see a fully voice acted version of this.
Thanks so much! It is indeed HTML- Used Twine Sugarcube as a base and then spiced it up with CSS and JavaScript!
A lot of the feedback has been sound related which is totally fair. I'm planning on looking into options for sound, music and as you've mentioned, voice acting- No idea where I'd start with voice acting but I agree, that would be amazing!
Stellar presentation, gripping story, and a twist i personally did not see coming :o
The character design is incedible and i like the whole interface as oldschool CRT display with scanlines and all, i also felt that involving the player directly into the story by letting you name the character really adds to the imersion, and makes some turns in the story particularly impactful.
The only issue is the total absence of sound and music, i feel this would complete the package, but well understandable for a jam game cause time do be runing short fast haha :p
Overall solid experience, Good job :)
Loved this one! Would have loved some sound, as mentioned, but the story didn't necessarily need it. Really nice to see another game in twine as well, haha. Really adored what you were going for here. Wish I had more to say, but... loved it! Great job!
Oh, I want more of that! Top marks! I managed to get an error:
<set $lenaRespect to $lenaRespect - 1>…
*Also, I got 3 achievements, how many endings are there?
Really impressive character art, especially when filtered through the crt effect! The story was great too, though there were a few typos throughout. Also, I could only seem to get one ending and I'm unsure what I'd need to do to find another one. Apart from that, it was a really solid entry!
Really nice art style and I really enjoyed playing this one! Story felt personal with the addition of adding your own name. Love it.
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