Story is straightforward, short, and simple. It's a bit lacking of more engagement, but it delivers something. Good submission.

I’ll be straightforward and say I wasn’t able to really play (and accordingly didn’t rate, so no harm done to your score). The browser graphics were too demanding and was seeing like 1-5fps. Admittedly I’m on a laptop, but most other unity 3d games were running nicely in browser - maybe too many post processor effects? Just thought you should know!

Cool portals mechanic, fun story to read through!

Interesting and fun game. I liked the portals and the ending.

This was a fun submission - i really liked that there was no punishment for getting it wrong, just more flavourful story to read :) hope to see more of you in GDKO!

Loved the portal mechanic!! 

The portal mechanic is really fun (and visually awesome).  I would love to see that expanded on, but in a different way.  (Seriously.  Push this further.)

The mouse movement was a bit off for me.  I could only turn the width of the window, then I'd have to go around the play area and continue from the other side. 

Good work all around.  Looking forward to seeing if you do anything with this idea.

The portals look really cool. The audio mechanics are interesting, but I feel that they could have been expanded on a bit more. For example, maybe having multiple endings, and different paths instead of one "right" choice every time.

Portal system is fun :)

It's alright, I don't think the FPS style controls really fit the text adventure theme, it all feels a bit slow and clunky. However that portal mechanic's brilliant and I'd love to see it in a different context.