Liked the game! enjoyed it,Great job!
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The Severed Clock's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Music | #108 | 3.615 | 3.615 |
| Story | #159 | 2.846 | 2.846 |
| Aesthetics | #364 | 3.308 | 3.308 |
| Overall | #466 | 2.846 | 2.846 |
| Mechanics | #469 | 2.615 | 2.615 |
| Fun | #559 | 2.462 | 2.462 |
| Sound | #588 | 1.923 | 1.923 |
| Theme | #638 | 2.308 | 2.308 |
Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How many people worked on this game in total?
1
Did you use any existing assets? If so, list them below.
Free fire VFX, Free Quick Effects, Procedural Painter, Stylized Provencal (free on leartesStudios)
Comments
that was a tall order my friend. think about your game (after playing a lot of different games and genres this week) made me realize that adventure games are probably the most difficult (singleplayer) genre to pull off in a gamejam, because their magic really comes from the unique combination of all its different components like puzzles, a world to explore, interesting characters and a narrative and then visuals and audio to bring it all together. you definitely pulled off a lot off that workload and you can see can see the promise of a really cool adventure game that delivers on all of these things. but I think you overscoped on a lot of these categories and making a smaller world and a shorter more contained story might have been a better pick? sorry for rambling. your game gave me quite a bit to think about and so I just did it here :-)
Nice music and pretty visuals in the main menu. Unfortunately, there’s not much content here. I found three tools, but didn’t receive anything in return :( On the technical side, I really missed the ability to rotate the camera. Congratulations on finishing the project and good luck! :)
PS. The game would benefit a lot from having a Web version. I’ve noticed that many people avoid downloading exe files, which means you’re missing out on a lot of potential players :/
Great soundtrack! The game looks good, and has easy controls, but I was a bit lost after putting out the fire, perhaps some sort of arrow system to point to the next mission would be a bit helpful. Good job though on building the world, looks great :)
Wasn't quite sure what I was supposed to do and some wandered to the end of the game immediately. Otherwise the looks and sounds are nice!
Such a beautiful start! Loved the atmosphere and point-and-click style. I’m curious to see where the story goes. This could be a gem!
thanks for adding the video :) looks beautiful and the title screen was awesome. looked like you had a basic inventory system working there and some good core elements all working well. congrats
This looked really promising and very beautiful but I had a few issues... there were many times where Elias was obscured by the scenery, being able to change the camera angle would be very useful here. Then after I had found the 3 toolsets for Garrin, he seemed to still keep asking for them and I couldn't figure out what to do next? Sorry I wasn't able to explore more of the game!
hey, you may get more reviews if you could add a youtube video? maybe some more screen shots. I only play WebGL games, but I can also give feedback and rate based on your gameplay video if you like. The 1 screenshot you have looks awesome!
As the Game use HDRP's rendering mode in Unity I cannot build for web, but you're right a video would be nice : Gameplay video


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