I loved the stunning visuals and the beautiful, relaxed audio...

My points:

1. The acceleration based movement just isn't working, like that other guys said, it takes a long time to align the laser to hit that 2nd target.

2. Most of the time I had no clear indication that where and what I'm supposed to b doing. Like, it was painful going through that growing white ball and not knowing what my goal is.

3. Rest all, I think, is just perfect enough for a first jam.

Wonderful Job :)

Overall a fun and moody puzzle game. I thought the laser mechanic was really interesting and allowed for some cool puzzles.

If you wanted to improve, I suggest some sort of sound effect for when something is triggered, it would help the game feel more responsive. You could even layer another instrument on top of the piano to get the effect of slowly building up to something. Also, the player character felt really slow, that may have just been my PC as it is older.

Overall, cool game!

To say the least I was a bit disapointed from this game..

Please do not take anything i say personaly, Im trying to give true feedback so you could learn and improve from it.

When i started the game I understood the lazer mechanic pretty fast, but after a while moving i found the first flaw, the Movement has acceleration and deceleration, which makes it really difficult to hit the orbs that open doors, On the second one i had to try for about 3 minuets just to aline it.

but after a while i found out the second problem, Theres no consistency, becuase the game was in only two colors, having consistency is really important, it gives the player a way to know how to react to an object and interact with it, but since almost everything in the game is made out of lines, i had no idea which part does what, and add to that some invisable walls and i had no idea if im even still in the course of the game.

but please, Dont be discoraged, For a first game jam this submition is great! (my first game jam's submition was much worse xD) and if you keep on trying, you will be improving! And i hope you will continue doing what you like. 

Good job anyways!

Nice game with a cool concept; I had a relaxing and fun time :)

I think a slower rotation speed and a faster movement might improve it; it’d probably lessen the disco strobe effect.

I liked the bouncing light ray concept but felt like it was under utilized. Unless I missed something. I got to the room with the two blocks and couldn’t figure out what else to do. The slow movement speed meant I really didn’t want to take the time to explore any further.

The music was alright and definitely had an ambient, relaxing quality to it, but the high pitched synth string notes were quite jarring. Like, they cut into me whenever they played.

Overall, it was pleasant experience, just felt like it was over before it really got going.

Nice game. Personally the music was a bit jarring for me. I liked the bouncing of the light ray around the place. The reflections were nice to play around with.

Interesting and cool game :) I felt that the ray could have been limited in lenght to avoid the "discotheque" effect when inside a circle, which for me breaks a little bit the relaxing mood. 

I like how the camera moved in and out as needed. It would be a relaxing game for me to play only I felt the movement was too slow. I wanted to move faster. I also would have like to see a button, like space, stop my rotation. It was sometimes a bit going back and forth to line up my line on a button. So using something like Space to almost instantly slow me down to a stop. Watching the lines bounce off the walls was stratifying as well and figuring out how something opened. Nice job.

This game offers exactly what it advertises: a meditative little puzzler. The visuals and audio feed into that very well, and having the game be in black and white really serves this sort of comfortable simple concept. I think it blends very well together.

There are a couple of negatives that do break from the immersion a bit. First, there's a slippery effect when you turn the player. In a relaxing game where precision is necessary, having to constantly shift around because your line keeps sliding off of your target is a tad on the annoying side. Second, and this one's a bit more subtle, the music could just go through a tiny bit of mixing to really bring it over the edge into amazing. It doesn't happen often, but there are a few choice high notes that are louder than the rest, and that too breaks from the immersion.

If you plan to continue working on this game after the jam is over, I really think it could turn something amazing. It's just fun and zen, which isn't a trait you see in many video games nowadays.