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A jam submission

Train Detective SkyView game page

Submitted by TwoEuroWineProduction (@wineproduction) — 1 minute, 15 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Graphics#234.3954.395
Audio#1653.5263.526
Game Design#1843.6323.632
Fun#2023.5533.553
Overall#2213.4963.496
Innovation#3803.2373.237
Theme#9022.6322.632

Ranked from 38 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

In what way does your game fit the theme?
You solve a crime in a train. The enviroment is very chaotic and you have to find clues in that chaos

Did you write all the code yourself and made all the assets from scratch?
Art and SFX are made from scratch
Most code is too (assets excluded. credit: Dialogue Chains)
music is AI generated

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Submitted(+1)

Really cool game! Two nitpicks I had:

- Walking seems pointless. It's too slow and doesn't really give any benefit. That plus the fact that you have to hold shift to run made it a bit more annoying to move.

- White text on white/light colored background. Made it difficult to read especially in these types of games.

Of course, these are not that big of a problem but could definitely be improved upon. Other than that tho, fantastic game! Really digging the presentation. Well done!

Developer

Thank you for your feedback!

We added the walking to contribute to the immersion of the player and to fit our main characters style. We thought it would look and feel weird if the player was always fast. But we will change that you have to hold down shift! And we will dig deeper into the font problem of course :)

Submitted

I'm just really impressed by how good the art is, Good job! I just hope it was more fitting to the theme, but that was enjoyable. Impressed you've done this in a week!

Submitted(+1)

Great !!

Submitted(+1)

I really like the entire game concept and everything works quite well. My only problem was with the white font over clear paper, which made it quite hard to read. But it's a good game nonetheless!

Developer(+1)

Thank you for your feedback, we will change the font color.

Submitted

Great stuff. Amazing effort put into the story and narrative. This is certainly a game worthy of firther development, I'd love to see what else you can do. Great stuff, I would love to hear your thoughts on my entry.

Developer

Thank you for your kind words :) 

We just rated your game and left you some feedback

Submitted

WOW, I am really impressed.  The artwork is pleasing to the eyes and there is a lot of polish with this project.  There are a few nitpicks I have with the game, such as not being able to move around when there is a dialogue about the mechanics and have to keep pressing space in order to bypass said dialogue (not sure if that made sense via text), but this project has a lot of potential!

Developer(+1)

Thank you for your kind words and the feedback, we will work on that and try to improve the experience and tutorials.

Submitted

Really cool and creative :o Reminded me of an adventure time episode haha

Developer(+1)

That is super funny, because her legs while running are kind of inspired by adventure time!

Submitted (1 edit)

The art is BEAUTIFUL. Very nicely done. Love the protagonist's personality and her reactions to certain items/moments. Great job :D

Developer

That is super nice to hear, we put a lot of love into her personality, super glad you liked it :)

Submitted

Ha, that is some cheap wine ;)

Cool game. I usually don't go for this style, but this was really cool to see be made for a jam. Plenty of content and pretty well polished. The tutorial text (and your itch page text) are almost unreadable though. The white on white was impossible and the black on dark brown was super difficult. The art and animations here are all super charming and well done. They do a lot of work for keeping this game engaging with an otherwise pretty low engagement genre (imo). The story was fun, the characters were cute. All around a good time. Thanks for sharing this with the jam :)

Developer

Thank you very much for your feedback, glad you liked it eventhough you are not the type for this style.

Submitted(+1)

Just Phenomenal artwork!! Loved the aesthetic soo much. And the music is AI generated... thats so cool! Great work nice story telling.

Submitted(+1)

Nicely done! 

Submitted

Amazing art and story! Is the music really AI-generated? It fits the game so well.

Developer(+1)

Thanks! Yes the music was generated, but we still had a hard time finding the right one!

Submitted

Really cute game. Great atmosphere and artwork. The characters were all interesting and had personality, so great job on that. My only negative feedback is minor, sometimes the game felt a little clunky trying to transition between notebook and dialog. I think since the mouse is part of the game it makes sense to move the UI over to button driven.  Overall, really good stuff. 

Developer

Thank you very much for your input! We will consider your idea, it sounds pretty good :)

Submitted

Game feel is epic and i loved your artwork. Great Efforts.

Developer

Thank you very much! Glad you liked it.

Submitted(+1)

Fun game! The Naruto run animation got me haha. Great take on the theme with a point and click murder mystery.

Developer

We´re glad that you enjoyed our game! Making the Runanimation was a lot of fun!

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

Cool detective game! I personally don't play a lot of detective game(if you doesn't count among us lol) but with art style and great story telling I still enjoyed it! Good job!


Also I would love to hear your feedback and rating on my game if you interested, just give it a try!
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Developer(+1)

We´re glad to hear that you enjoyed our detective game, even if you dont play detective games usually.

Submitted(+1)

By far the best art I have seen yet. It's charm is absolutely wonderful. Great dialogue and animations. Wish the text was a tad faster, or speed-up-able but that's really minor. Great game!

Developer

Thank you so much! This complement means a lot to me (V, the artist). by pressing space again, you can speed the dialogues.

(+1)

Excellent game! I enjoy detective games and this is it! Superb animation (run animation), controls are simple , great storytelling too!  Keep it up!

Developer

Thank you! We´re glad to hear that you enjoyed our game! We will defenietly keep workin on this game after the jam.

Submitted

The run animation is perfect!!

Developer

Thank you!

Submitted(+1)

Damn, I love the game art and the story, I see potential here, Keep it up with good works 👍

Developer

We´re glad to hear that you enjoyed the game and the art! We will defenetly keep working on this game in the future.

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