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A jam submission

The Adventure of Toast & MuffinView game page

A game made by my 10 year old sister
Submitted by Toasty (@RPGtimeYT) — 21 days, 13 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Writing/Story#173.1433.143
Creativity#213.4293.429
Overall#253.0163.016
Gameplay#292.4762.476

Ranked from 21 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

  • OMG how adorable was this?! I mean seriously, sooooo adorable! Great job muffin, your game made me laugh quiet a few times, you have a fabulous sense of humor :D
  • Hey :) That was funny. Your game made me laugh several time. :) Good job to you and your little sister. Cya :) Drag

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

Well... I... sure wasn't expecting that. To be honest, I expected a bit more. I see this game was meant as a joke, but... I don't know what to think. This game... confuses me. ... Let's-let's just go with what I have to say about it.

- I feel like it's really too bad you can't just step back to places you already visited. Like there is a door-sized hole in the wall of a house, but you can't enter said house. Why not just put a door there, even if it's doing nothing? And there is multiple instances like that - like a rock appearing from nowhere. I mean what if there is stuff I wanted to check back in town?

- AAAAAAAAAAAH! AAAAAAAAAAAH! AAAAAAAAAAAH! AAAAAAAAAAAH! Do I need to say any more? It's funny at first, but the screams are really too strong. Lowering their volume would have make this joke so much more enjoyable.

Anyway, I wish you good luck for your future projects, the both of you! ^^

TL;DR: Do not steal your dad's credit card. (Seriously, don't.)

Jam Judge(+1)

Hey there! Not sure if you saw, but we did high level feedback of your Jam entry on our YouTube channel:

Jam Judge(+1)

Attention span of a log. <3

Submitted(+1)

Had a good chuckle with the dialogue! Much better than anything 10-year-old me can come up with!

Submitted(+1)

Super fun. Reminds me of Axe Cop. Each interaction with NPCs was rewarding, and I really wish I could see more of them. Some of them (Cheddar boy?) were quite mysterious.

To improve the game, I'd love for Muffin to have scripted interactions with all the items around town. I feel like that could have been done in a second afternoon, and would only require log-length attention span. Make more games Muffin!  

Developer(+1)

Great idea for an addition! I’ll see if I can push her to do that if and when we work on any more games together!

Submitted(+1)

10 outta 10. Will walk into the woods again.

I'd put something serious here but... well... the game's a meme at this point. So... will she make a sequel?

Developer(+1)

I would love to make a sequel with her! I'll have to ask, but if we ever get around to it I will be sure to let y'all know!

(+2)

This was pretty funny. I'd like to see more. I was pretty excited to get to the forest, but surprised by the appearance of the cloaked figure. Good first game!

Developer(+1)

Thank you so much! You brought a big smile to her face XD

Submitted(+1)

This was cute, you can tell it was made by someone with the attention span of a log. I actually found myself chuckling at the interactions, like with the cafe and the beggar. Kid has potential.

Developer(+1)

awe thank you 😊 You made her day XD

Submitted(+1)

The dialog was funny, I lol'd at the ending.

Submitted(+2)

Hahaha Most random shit ever happens here....LOVED IT.

Submitted(+2)

Fastest... game... EVAR... for a speed runner like myself. May want to lower headphones cause one scream... RIP headphone users... a little screech from Pokemon Gym Leader Koga doesn't bother him tho...

Submitted(+1)

would a rip from a pokemon game be considered rtp?