Hey :). 

Puisque tu es français, je ne vais pas m'embêter à écrire mon évaluation en anglais. J'ai trouvé ton jeu plutôt bon, bien qu'il souffre de quelques défauts qui m'ont un peu fait grincer des dents. 

Dans l'ensemble, l'histoire est bonne et recherchée, il y a quelques fautes d'anglais, mais c'est compréhensible puisque tu n'est pas anglais, je fais moi-même beaucoup d'erreur de traduction. En revanche, j'ai trouvé le retournement de chemise du héro principal un peu brusque, mal amenée, trop rapide. Pourquoi aiderait-t-il une totale inconnue quitte a se mettre un empire entier à dos ?  

Au niveau du mapping, j'ai un avis plus mitigé. Je ne sais pas pourquoi, mais tes cartes m'ont laissé un peu sur ma faim. De plus, certaines ne sont pas très réalistes, comme celle de la forêt (avoir une rangée d'arbres bien droite en plein milieu pour cacher un coffre au bout... tu vois ce que je veux dire ?)

Enfin, au niveau du système de combat, il y a encore une fois des bons et des mauvais points. J'ai aimé le fait de pouvoir customizer les personnages en choisissant quels stats monter avec les parchemins, choisir qui aura quel skills, et avoir un bon nombre d'armures et armes parmi lesquelles choisir. En revanche, j'ai trouvé les combats en eux-mêmes assez lents et ennuyeux, et certains des boss on des mécaniques assez rageantes, comme Lucius. 

Enfin, gros point noir pour moi : le fait de devoir grinder pour pouvoir avancer (j'ai essayé d'aller battre directement Lucius par deux fois sans m'entrainer, et impossible de le battre). 

Enfin bref, j'ai tout de même apprécié les 30 min que j'ai passé sur ton jeu, bien joué, et merci pour ta participation ! 

A la prochaine ! :)

Drag.

Hey there! We did a high level review of your entry this weekend and would like you to see it on our channel. You can find the exact time to skip to in the description:

I liked this game overall. It has a little bit of everything: story, a flexible and intriguing combat system, and a variety of maps.

However, I felt like for every step this game took forward, it also took a step back. For instance:

• I loved the fact that there are a lot of options for customizing your characters from the beginning, like choosing to be a physical-stat-focused warrior or a caster, and even to specialize in a single element (or all of them!)
• However, the presentation of this combat system is...pretty plain. Using the front-view battle style made combat feel less animated, and the abundance of text the default system uses made me feel like I was reading more than I was seeing. Additionally, lack of enemy health indicators made it difficult to know how close I was to winning the battle.
• The story is good. There are characters with their own personalities, there is history between the characters and some political intrigue, and it all has a decent conclusion!
• However, this needs a thorough proofreading very badly. It looks like you're translating from another language, so I have to pay some respect for writing in a language that you may not know well, but it really drags on the quality of the story to see a misused word or a misspelling on every text box.

Other random observations:

• Was your selection sound effect from the RTP? If so, it rocks!
• The final battle was unique and interesting

Once again, I thought this was overall a good game. Keep up the good work!

I wanted to say that the final battle was pretty well done and the story has an interesting concept.

But there are also some drawbacks that slightly worsened my impression of the game.  First of all the random encounter system,  for most people this mechanic is very annoying and unnecessary wide maps and disabling debuffs only add up to it. Its really better when enemies are visible and chasing you. And about disabling debuffs, there are 4 of them: confusion, sleep, rage and charm. It is good that there are potions that heal them but you can't use them if 2 of your characters are disabled at the same time and you can still get the debuff right after you healed it with a potion. It would be better if those anti ailment potions also gave a short immunity to those debuffs because everytime you use them you miss an opportunity to attack or heal thus making the fight longer. In some cases its easier to just let it be, especially with the sleep state its a lot easier to just let enemy attack you to break the effect. 

Equipment gives you stats that you can't see like physical damage resist. I know that you didn't use any plugins so you couldn't use yanlfy's extended status menu plugin but you could at least write the number in description, for example instead of writing "this armor increase your physical damage resistance" you could write "this armor increase your physical damage resistance by 15%" . I can't judge if item is worth buying without seeing the actual numbers. Also descriptions of some items are a bit obscure:

^I don't get what it means at all.^

Also about mapping, I didn't know where to go in that building at the last location. I clicked on those blue carpets and expected them to lead me into  a room but nothing happened so I thought its just for decoration.

I made 2 circles around the building while fighting and escaping numerous encounters until I realized that I should click on a wall to enter a room because there were no doors, no gaps in a wall, nothing to indicate that theres a passage here except for small carpets that aren't clickable. And as one wise man once said "always assume that the player is stupid" so make it easier to know where to go. 

And also I find it weird that the mc has lvl7 at the start of the game but the girl has only lvl4 which makes her kind of a deadweigth in the battle against Lucius.

That's all I had to say I hope Drifty will like your game (or at least won't be too mad XD). Good luck with your project!

P.s. your poster has 3 characters and we never get to see the third one, I wonder who is it?

I thought this was going to be a generic rpg and I was gladly surprised. I like the magic learn system, like you can customize who learns what. I like the final battle switching between Iron Giant and the Girl. Also liked how you reward the player by backtracking .

I suggest making the player grind a bit when the girl joins since i went straight to the Lucius fight and got my ass kicked.  Also, the healing on the enemy Iron Giant is a bit frustrating.

I had fun, good job!  (I also laughed haaard since I can pick the characters names and well...im not mature in that regard, i hope you dont mind XD)

Really love the switching focus with the final battle. Good job!

Escape from north korea 10\10

This was a nice quick epic tale, the tomes were neat. I feel like they might be living in the modern world but the leaders have everyone secluded and brainwashed.