When entering the academy, one paragraph says:

In the Main Hall you pass by $enteringacademy.

At the start of the fight with the lich in the Necromancers folly, I don't remember exactly what he said but it was along the lines of " With your power, I can get back at the inhabitance of <noInput>" or something like that. Sorry but I don't remember exactly what. 

Also, this game is amazing. I expected a short, hour-long play type game that would be enjoyable but not particularly memorable. Instead, I got a fully developed game with multiple stories, characters, and possibilities that I would have been willing to pay for if it had cost money.

I noticed 2 small bugs in Coral City and one probably unclosed tag for if you follow a wisp.

first, if you go to the Amphitheater and examine the building, you are kicked to the Split Island.

second, the second time you get to 3 arches, there is an unclosed <span> tag.

I also found about 4 or 5 minor typos. I'm not sure how best to present them.

I wouldn't have found these bugs if I weren't so interested in the game!

The wisp graphics are attached.

And one final report for the day ... hope this isn't too much to deal with! This is more like a small feature request.

Once you've bought all the mage spells, should we have different text? Everything's functionally okay, but maybe a "we taught you all you could learn" as for when you learn a 3rd skill would be appropriate. Here's what I see after buying all spells. (Also, could/should "back" be detailed as "back to the main hall?"

I’m in a room in the mines with a lot of text. The description text overlaps the compass directions.

Trivia with verb tense:

Is it worth putting in conditional text to say something like "The Enchanter will help you repair the compass <if renown < 5>when you reach<else><now you've reached> 5 renown." once the player that level?

More typo trivia:

The Avatar of Doom sends dozens of (crystals spikes) -> crystal spikes (3 places in source)

The Goliath (attack) with its claws -> (attacks) (2 places in source)

I'm having trouble with the dragon pearl (which, unfortunately, locks Dragon Island for me):

Combat in dragon form doesn't terminate because of this.

I noticed two off-by-one errors during a playthrough.

1. Golem's core/sculptor bug: If the sculptor asks for 3 golem's cores, and you have 2, they take them, and you have -1 golem's cores.

The culprit here is an if-then statement that says >= 2 instead of > 2 or >= 3. (search for "3 golem cores")

2. Levitation potion bug: At the yellow pillar, if you have only one levitation potion, it doesn't ask if you want to use one.

The culprit here is an if-then statement saying "if levitation > 1" which should be ">= 1" (assuming you aren't forcing the player to save their only potion for later e.g. floating to the top of the spire)

Some stuff about the devourer fight:

The text for "one slimed goblin" should have a period after it. Though an alternate solution is to take the "left." from "$enemyhealcharges slimed goblins left." and put " left." outside the if statement.

Would it also be possible to make the "burn a slimed goblin" text conditional, e.g. it disappears once they're all gone? It might be too much to check if you *can* burn a slimed goblin (functions in Twine are tricky from what I understand) but another if statement as in

<<if $enemy.name == "Spirit of the Mist" && $mistnameunlocked != true>>\

And finally, can the specialplayeraction for the devourer be conditional? When one goblin is left it'd be a neat touch to say "Burn the final slimed goblin" instead of "Burn one of the slimed goblins".

Finally, some typos. This is a bit of a text dump, as they're probably best done at once, searching through the source, but let me know about any concerns with my individual suggestions.

Your opponents seems ecstatic at her victory.

-> Your opponent seems ecstatic at her victory.

"Luckily, they were empty, as aren't transporting any cargo."

missing "you" plus a shift in verb tense

-> "Luckily, they were empty, as (you) (weren't) transporting any cargo."

Tell the Inventor you're a recpected member of the Academy

-> Tell the Inventor you're a respected member of the Academy

"You dare intrude upon Arch-lich Egros, mortal?" the undead hissess

-> "You dare intrude upon Arch-lich Egros, mortal?" the undead hisses

It's clear telling his story costed him a lot, and that he's utterly desperate.

-> It's clear telling his story cost him a lot, and (that) he's utterly desperate.

("that" is minor stylistic stuff)

When Quicksilver Crossobw is the active weapon, there's a chance that using ranged techniques

-> When Quicksilver Crossbow is the active weapon, there's a chance that using ranged techniques

This may or may not make a difference anywhere in the output, but a variable name was off.

While wandering through the dense jungles of $currenislandname you walk into a small clearing and stop in amazement.
-> While wandering through the dense jungles of $currentislandname you walk into a small clearing and stop in amazement.

The market is noisy and crowded; goods from all over the Archipelago are being traded, people are chattin, haggling and buying food at street stalls.

chattin -> chattin' (or more likely chatting)

I may call some beastie after you if you really help me.

-> "I may name some beastie after you if you really help me." (semantics: calling after is different from naming after. "Call" implies he will call the beastie to chase you.)

Finally, the serpents gives up the chase.

-> Finally, the serpent gives up the chase.

Sungleam doesn't deal physical damage, instead ...

-> Sungleam doesn't deal physical damage. Instead, ...

???? also in the Sungleam description

armour, but is -> armour but is

Coral Cave monument text:

Both leaders were convinced the other side is preparing to attack them.

-> Both leaders were convinced the other side was preparing to attack them.

The skeleton dragon roars and flies at you, trying to crush you!

-> The skeletal dragon roars and flies at you, trying to crush you!

(both are grammatically ok--"dragon skeleton" sounds a bit better than the reverse IMHO--but skeletal dragon is the name of the enemy so I think that's what's best)

When returning the statue to the temple after finding a thief, I seriously think the player should gain some renoun for doing this. Since the guards didn't chace the thief into the sewers, and the  villagers thought they'd never see their treasure again, surely this is worth a small bit of renoun, or would the quest be considered too insignificant, due to it being a small village? I do have a counterpoint to that, even. Surely, the villagers would spread word about this, and the beginner's tips do say you gain renoun for doing good deeds. What are your thoughts?

that's fair. Thesame can be said for the one about the children and the curse in the village, as the villagers just seem suspicious of everyone but you get some good experience.

Do you think you'd also be adding the ability to pick what objective you try for a playthrough, or do you think it'll just be a list of classes? I do wonder how many there are, as when I played a couple of weeks back I kept on getting the story of relics and the story of spire, but when I started again yesterday, first time, I got pirate captains, which is a completely new one to me. I do wonder how it'll go, and am enjoying it so far. Managed to explore several islands on this playthrough and this time, I have magic.

Reporting a few typos (which may already be fixed since I played a little while ago):

• The wise Queen saw through the Serpent's lies and lead her army to fight it. —> led
• Lost Gem Island used to be the source of the clearest, most valuable gemstones in the Archipelago – until the ever expanding marshes have flooded the mineshaft the stones were found in. —> "have" seems extraneous
• You know, You know, most people only know about Lahni from the great leap story, —> double "You know"

Also, this game is so good and I love it <3 <3

Passerine's post reminded me of a few more miscellaneous typos to sweep up whenever... (my local index.html reads 11/2)

(Red Knight)

But you look like and adventurer

-> But you look like *an* adventurer

(Hunting Fury)

The monsters emerges

-> The *monster* emerges

(Various combat)

The stone eel shoots a ball lightning out of its mouth

The tamed stone eel shoots a ball lightning out of its mouth at $enemy

The elementalist summons a ball lightning and sends it flying at you

(general search/replace) a ball lightning -> a ball of lightning

I gotta be honest, it's a kinda hard to start out for me. I can't beat anything, everything hits more damage to me than I do to them and has more HP. Don't mean to complain but some advice would be appreciated, especially since I'm slowly going broke without any source of income LOL.