When entering the academy, one paragraph says:

In the Main Hall you pass by $enteringacademy.

At the start of the fight with the lich in the Necromancers folly, I don't remember exactly what he said but it was along the lines of " With your power, I can get back at the inhabitance of <noInput>" or something like that. Sorry but I don't remember exactly what. 

Also, this game is amazing. I expected a short, hour-long play type game that would be enjoyable but not particularly memorable. Instead, I got a fully developed game with multiple stories, characters, and possibilities that I would have been willing to pay for if it had cost money.

I noticed 2 small bugs in Coral City and one probably unclosed tag for if you follow a wisp.

first, if you go to the Amphitheater and examine the building, you are kicked to the Split Island.

second, the second time you get to 3 arches, there is an unclosed <span> tag.

I also found about 4 or 5 minor typos. I'm not sure how best to present them.

I wouldn't have found these bugs if I weren't so interested in the game!

The wisp graphics are attached.

And one final report for the day ... hope this isn't too much to deal with! This is more like a small feature request.

Once you've bought all the mage spells, should we have different text? Everything's functionally okay, but maybe a "we taught you all you could learn" as for when you learn a 3rd skill would be appropriate. Here's what I see after buying all spells. (Also, could/should "back" be detailed as "back to the main hall?"

I’m in a room in the mines with a lot of text. The description text overlaps the compass directions.

Trivia with verb tense:

Is it worth putting in conditional text to say something like "The Enchanter will help you repair the compass <if renown < 5>when you reach<else><now you've reached> 5 renown." once the player that level?

More typo trivia:

The Avatar of Doom sends dozens of (crystals spikes) -> crystal spikes (3 places in source)

The Goliath (attack) with its claws -> (attacks) (2 places in source)

I'm having trouble with the dragon pearl (which, unfortunately, locks Dragon Island for me):

Combat in dragon form doesn't terminate because of this.

I noticed two off-by-one errors during a playthrough.

1. Golem's core/sculptor bug: If the sculptor asks for 3 golem's cores, and you have 2, they take them, and you have -1 golem's cores.

The culprit here is an if-then statement that says >= 2 instead of > 2 or >= 3. (search for "3 golem cores")

2. Levitation potion bug: At the yellow pillar, if you have only one levitation potion, it doesn't ask if you want to use one.

The culprit here is an if-then statement saying "if levitation > 1" which should be ">= 1" (assuming you aren't forcing the player to save their only potion for later e.g. floating to the top of the spire)

Some stuff about the devourer fight:

The text for "one slimed goblin" should have a period after it. Though an alternate solution is to take the "left." from "$enemyhealcharges slimed goblins left." and put " left." outside the if statement.

Would it also be possible to make the "burn a slimed goblin" text conditional, e.g. it disappears once they're all gone? It might be too much to check if you *can* burn a slimed goblin (functions in Twine are tricky from what I understand) but another if statement as in

<<if $enemy.name == "Spirit of the Mist" && $mistnameunlocked != true>>\

And finally, can the specialplayeraction for the devourer be conditional? When one goblin is left it'd be a neat touch to say "Burn the final slimed goblin" instead of "Burn one of the slimed goblins".