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A jam submission

Gift Train (GameDev.tv Jam 2023)View game page

They forgot about Mother's Day. They better act fast or Mom will be angry!
Submitted by waijee — 4 minutes, 7 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Fun#733.8283.828
Story#943.3793.379
Mechanics#1343.5863.586
Sound#2523.0003.000
Music#2753.1723.172
Aesthetics#2983.4143.414
Theme#4932.6902.690

Ranked from 29 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted(+1)

That was fun :D I like the zooming out as your gift tail gets longer and longer, feels like a good progression! Also picking up random items and even Jason from the streets to bring as a present.. that's quite something :P Great job, I had a good time!

Developer(+1)

Thanks for playing and your encouraging comments! I appreciate it.

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

I read the dev notes. You made the right cuts. Especially the last one, I don't think it would be fun either if the gift train could break.

Developer

Thanks for playing and thanks for your observation. The more I think about it, the more I think that breaking the train would be the wrong kind of challenge.

Regarding the other cuts, I'm actually working on extending the game and adding in the cut feature. I'll probably put it up as a separate project so as to not interfere with the jam submission. I'll put a link in the game description to that new project when I'm done.

Thanks again.

Developer

Hi. If you are interested, I did finish the enhanced version and deployed it. You can find it here:

https://waijee.itch.io/gift-train-mothers-day-mayhem-edition

Thanks!

Submitted(+1)

Cool, I will try it

Submitted(+1)

Awesome spin on a katamari-like mechanic.  I loved how weird some of the gifts were - was there a crab with a shiv in there????

Only critical feedback was that at high zoom the small items are kinda hard to see.   Otherwise, loved it :D

Developer(+1)

Thanks for playing and your feedback. I'm of two minds on the zoom. I am concerned that the small items are hard to see, but I want that sense of perspective when the train gets long. Not saying I have to copy it, but in the Katamari Damacy games, the perspective does pull back and the smallest items kinda "disappear" as they don't matter much anymore...

I'm working on an enhanced version of the game with more content. I might rethink it and maybe make some tweaks after I iterate through it.

Thanks again.

Submitted

This is great and surprisingly fun. I love how effective the simple mechanic is. I also like the oddball sense of humor.

Developer

Thanks for playing. Yeah, oddball was what I was going for so I'm happy that goal was achieved. I wanted the mother to be a crazy person too and have multiple crazy endings, but ran out of time. I might enhance the game more after the jam.

Submitted(+1)

You should!

Developer

Hi. If you are interested, I did finish the enhanced version and deployed it. You can find it here:

https://waijee.itch.io/gift-train-mothers-day-mayhem-edition

Thanks!

Submitted

2230 points with 101 gifts and I got the "good night sleep"
Was rly fun. Having the gifts follow you made me think of the strawberries in celest.
Only thing I have to say that you should maybe tweak some of the collisions because I got stuck from time to time - I'm guessing you used some box colliders- maybe just round them out and it should be more fluid

Developer

Thanks for playing.

Kinda. The grid map uses colliders, but not the player. I was trying out something different where I'd avoid Unity's physics system and not use a RigidBody for the player. I had recently finished Code Monkey's very excellent Youtube course and he used Physics.CapsuleCast() to determine wall collision. I thought I'd try using the Physics2D.CircleCast() and it works, but not super well when approaching corners...  The gifts use the same technique.

I might enhance this game after the jam and change the player to use the RigidBody component, but leave the gifts as is. Not sure when too many RigidBody's may cause a problem, but I do hear they have some overhead.

Thanks for the advice though!

Developer

Hi. If you are interested, I created an enhanced version of the game. I reworked the movement and colliders. It greatly fixed all my issues. The enhanced version also has some extra features like more gifts and multiple endings. You can find it here:

https://waijee.itch.io/gift-train-mothers-day-mayhem-edition

Thanks!

Submitted

I tested it and it works better now! Glad I could help.

Submitted(+1)

Very good-natured and positive game. I wish there were more games like this. Thank you!

Developer(+1)

Thanks playing and the kind words.

Submitted(+1)

Dude, so good! I love that the items follow you around, and that you need to collect smaller items to get the big items was a great touch.

I want a child that will give me chris hemsworth and jason statham on my birthday. 

The items getting progressively weirder is hilarious  (the happy mom bottle aa)

So fun, it sounds like it was really fun to make

Developer

Thanks for playing the game. I was very inspired by Katamari Damacy, a very weird, but fun game.

Submitted(+1)

Really fun little game, the fact that the items follow you around is really funny while confusing in a good way, requirement of more points to collect bigger items brings it all together because you have to plan out your route. Too bad the music isnt a "perfect" loop but its still pretty nice. And the whole theme of mother's day is really fitting for the date hah
[Just noticed you submitted 4 minutes before, damn, good job hahhha]

Developer(+1)

Thanks for playing and you comments. Yeah, I thought I'd have lots of time to submit, but there was always something...

Submitted

same here hah, had to polish it till the last hour especially since Ive started a day late

Submitted(+1)

Very fun casual game. This kid's mother is going to be happy.

Developer

With those many gifts, she better be! Haha.

Thanks for playing!

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