Cute little game! I would love it if there were some more sound effects. But the music was nice, and making the necklace was very fun!
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Ms. Mouse and the pearl necklace's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Presentation | #18 | 4.130 | 4.130 |
| Cozy Fall Vibes | #23 | 4.043 | 4.043 |
| Overall | #39 | 3.565 | 3.565 |
| Creativity | #53 | 3.304 | 3.304 |
| Enjoyment | #67 | 2.783 | 2.783 |
Ranked from 23 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Very pretty arts! Well done.
Music are beautiful and fitting, but I also wish there was sound effects for interactions.
I read the game page description and was able to figure out the necklace threading minigame so that was ok to me, but an in-game tutorial would have been nicer.
The story is sweet but my honest opinion is that the writing and dialogue could use more work. The dialogues read very unnatural to me.
If this game was a bit longer with some more scenarios it would have been very good. It was a bit too short😅 . But of course I understand it's not always possible given the timeline. Still, good job overall!
Thank you for playing our game 💖
We totally agree with your feedback. Like you may have already read it in the comments, we ran out of time to implement everything.
We made the game in a little bit less than 2 days and are a team of 2 so, as always, we had to simplify our game haha (much more than expected honestly).
Also, game jams are always a great way to improve our skills and, for example, it was our first time ever animating characters with a skeleton ✨
Sorry for the writing errors, we are not native English speakers 🫣
Very beautiful game! I really liked the vibe and the esthetic! I struggle a little to understand how to put the pearls on the necklace but once I figured it out it was really nice!
The art in this one is so cute! I also love the story, it really nails that cozy fall vibe.
I was kind of confused on what to do in the threading screen but when I found that you could thread the pearls onto the necklace from the bottom that was really satisfying. Maybe some sort of indication of how many pearls you need would have been nice, I had to look through the comments here to find that out. Also I noticed quite late that the pearls only count once they snap in place at the top of the string.
But those are only minor things. This is a great entry, good job! :)
The art is beautiful. It would have been great if there was a bit more gameplay in it. Also, there is a visual bug present: there's a horizontal black line spanning the entire screen, about 1 third of the way up from the bottom.
Good job & congratulations on the submission!
Hello !
The game was first intended to have more content but we only could work on it for 2 days instead of 3, so we chose to cut down the story to have a game that could be completed.
But yes, we totally agree that a longer story would have been great ✨
I do also have this bug on my computer, but we couldn't figure out where it comes from before the end of the deadline.
Thank you for playing and for your feedback 💖
feels like a story book! I was walking through the forest mesmerized for quite a bit, didn’t realize I had to click hahaha
Such a cute little game! The art is beautiful, straight out of a story book. <3 It would shine even more with a more fleshed-out story, but I see on your page you're already planning more content, so I'm curious to see what you add! :)
Cute art style and a feel-good short story. Definitely cozy! I think an animated arrow at the bottom of the thread would help - I had the same problem as pretty much everyone in the comments ;)
Very nice art, music and animations!
I also couldn't figure out what happens after you put together the necklace.
The art is lovely, but I couldn't figure out how to proceed beyond adding beads to the necklace.



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