Very pretty arts! Well done.
Music are beautiful and fitting, but I also wish there was sound effects for interactions.
I read the game page description and was able to figure out the necklace threading minigame so that was ok to me, but an in-game tutorial would have been nicer.
The story is sweet but my honest opinion is that the writing and dialogue could use more work. The dialogues read very unnatural to me.
If this game was a bit longer with some more scenarios it would have been very good. It was a bit too short😅 . But of course I understand it's not always possible given the timeline. Still, good job overall!