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her body unswept by laughter.'s itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Creativity | #9 | 4.206 | 4.206 |
| Sound | #32 | 3.651 | 3.651 |
| Simplicity | #53 | 3.937 | 3.937 |
| WOWIE! (Overall) | #69 | 3.413 | 3.413 |
| Visuals | #135 | 3.143 | 3.143 |
| Fun | #135 | 3.095 | 3.095 |
| Topic | #160 | 2.873 | 2.873 |
Ranked from 63 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I like this SO DAMN MUCH. It seems like something out of a horror game but in text or SOMETHING like that
Thank you so much! Haha appreciate you playing & leaving a comment, it made my day
Wow that was very different, I have never seen anything like it!! I really enjoyed it and it felt, weird idk how to describe but its a feeling you only get every once in a while. It was an amazing game!!
thanks so much!!
Really reminded me of a game called (I think) "My Uncle Works at Nintendo". I love how the text can change on the fly, even though text-based games never were my cup of tea. Well done! :)
thanks for playing!
OMG just played it, it's amazing!!! i think it's built in the same system i'm using (twine) because it gives the same error code. this is literally what i wish i could do lol. thanks for recommending it
It was a great mix of wholesome and cryptic, with sort of an undertale vibe, if that makes sense. Loved it, congratulations, it was an awesome experience, especially given the amount of time you had to work on it. Keep going.
Thanks so much for playing and your kind words!! <3 i really appreciate it
Original for sure! Well done for a first game jam! Keep it up!
thanks for playing! i really enjoyed yours :)
It needs a tutorial or a "how to play", other than that, it's really fun, good job :)
Please consider rating my game too ^^
ah, here you are haha! thanks for playing! and i'll definitely include a tutorial next time, i appreciate the feedback :)
your game was awesome and very addictive!
LOL!
thanks a lot ^^
It's an enjoyable experience, Very calm game.
I liked it :)
thanks for playing!!
Original idea but im not just friend of text adventures. Still enjoyed. Keep working with original ideas like this. I like it
thanks for playing!
Interesting and unexpected game ! I liked the originality of the gameplay and the choices. But Haven't seen much of the topic though (hidden links ?).
ah yes it's there but admittedly hard to get to.. blade 4 in the petals section says how to reach it (or just hover around the bits)! Thanks for playing
This was so weird, I like it! :D I don't think I've seen another submission go with "broken text adventure" theme, so points for originality there, too. The music fits the mood, but gets a little bothersome after awhile. I wondered if there was a riddle to solve when a petal said something about third thorn and first petal... but couldn't figure out the other two sentences.
hey thanks for playing!! im sorry for the confusing language, they were just a few more "hidden links" to the clicked on anther and pistil sections :)
I really liked your game, made me super sad.... in an wholesome way :')
thanks for playing!! Can i ask why it made you sad? def not my intention haha
I meant it in a good, poetic way P:
haha okay :) appreciate you playing and providing feedback!
Good Game :DD but you should explain the mechanic first :DD other then that its very fun :DDDDD
if you would like to test my game:
https://itch.io/jam/wowie-jam-2/rate/552828
thanks for playing and giving feedback!! I'll definitely find a way to explain the mechanic in future updates & games.
I would love to play your game, but i only have a mac to work with at the moment and it looks like it's only available for windows. If you can make a make version let me know and I'll give it a go!!
i like it, even i dont know what it was !
thanks for giving it a shot!!
i really want to play your game but i'm on a mac and the download isn't working :( looks super cute and polished though!
This game is a piece of art. It got me chilling and I somehow got goosebumps with the music. A super cool experience, thanks for making this game :D Also feel free to check my game if you can ;)
Also love the parth of the image dancing XDD "the image is dancing! you're dancing! (take a dance break)" Super funny
hey thanks for playing!! and dancing! haha
played your game, it's SO GOOD! thanks for giving mine a go :)
I don´t know what that is but it is cool.
haha thanks for giving it a shot!
Very poetic game helped by a trippy music !
Great submission
thanks for playing!
edit: unfortunately i only have access to a mac right now, so i can't play your game, but it looks like a really fun one!
I absolutely loved the background music choice, I didnt quite undrestand what was going on but Ive seen some beautiful sentence like "ice rose thorn, melt or let it be", how ever music didnt start ever again after refresh but I could listen to it from the license link. Also I love html instant games without loadings. tnx
hey thanks for playing! i appreciate the feedback, next time i'll try to make it more apparent what's going on. so far as music goes -- what browser are you playing in? i think that might have an effect on it working, but i'm not sure. anyways, thank you for bringing this to my attention -- i'll do my best to fix it!
nice little text game (: I enjoyed it, even though i was really lost at the start
thanks so much for playing, and the feedback!! can i ask what made you lost at the start, and at which point you started to feel more oriented?
Simple and good transitions, but bit confusing game. I like the sounds.
Thanks for playing and providing feedback! What would make it less confusing? or what made it confusing?
Alright! At the beginning I thought I need to highlight the text to do something as clicking start wasn't starting the game
Then I got a rose and a lot of stem stem STEM STEM STEM STEM STEM stem stem stem text
Then I got some poetic questions and tips, and I knew it's not my type of the game. I'm sorry.
No need to apologize! thanks so much for your feedback, i really appreciate it :)
I didn't know what to do but I figured that when I am clicking to go back in browser I am backing in game which is cool!! Oh and I love how this poem is written good job.
thanks for playing! glad you figured out that bug/mechanic — would you say that it added (or detracted) from your play experience?
Appreciate you and your feedback!