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Ranked from 14 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
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Split your text up so it's a bit easier to read and use a video to showcase gameplay!
Presskit link broken. Tweet could use some more tagging and call to action. The tweet is good otherwise - quite clear what the game is about.
Feedback submitted as Indie Legion.
Nice retro look and feel. Love the goblin premise.
We think you could legitimately call it "Untitled Goblin Game" and it would work permanently. 😉
Suggestions:
-- Recommend using an uploaded video for your Tweet for Pitch Ya Game, clips get much better traction.
-- You can set your video to use a link to your page with Twitter Ad Cards. Jump in Discord and ask your team if you don't know how.
Game concept explained well through gifs on the itch page
Tweet needs more hashtags and should use one of the many gifs ( you could even make a small thread of 4-5 gifs)
It's ironic, but for a title whose literal title is actually also well in development... I was already hooked!
The itch page was informative and it conveyed its features through illustration rather than words, for the most part.
The only thing I could see someone be put-off by is the time it takes to wait for the game to be dropped~
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