I really liked the press kit. I'd look to add some of this information into the tweet itself. If there is combat could we see how that works in the video? There is also mention of crafting with no look at this either. If they are key to your gameplay I'd look to add those in.
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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Overall Pitch Quality | #5 | 3.933 | 3.933 |
Engagement | #6 | 3.667 | 3.667 |
Clarity | #14 | 3.267 | 3.267 |
Unique Selling Point | #14 | 3.333 | 3.333 |
Ranked from 15 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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- Great video on tweet Solid Press kit Would like to know a bit more about the gameplay
- Feedback submitted as Indie Legion.
- Stand out entry! Cute game and recovering your body sounds like a unique premise! Tweet is well crafted and includes your link. Solid Press Kit which covers key information and includes great visuals and other media. Suggestions: -- Keep refining the tweet and the Press Kit -- getting lots of feedback from everyone around you -- until it's a finely honed weapon of mass downloadination.. ;-) -- There isn't much about the gameplay itself. We've suggested a tweet edit (via Realms Games) that includes a couple of key gameplay features. -- Publication Date is a very tricky one. From the perspective of a gamer, I'd like to get at least an idea of when it might be coming out, even just the estimated year. As an aspiring Dev, I feel like setting a target could also be good for motivation. (Might go the other way round too though.)
- Clear and concise pitch, the video in the tweet immediately shows what the game is about. The concept doesn't sound very unique, but the part of "recovering your body" does seem somewhat interesting.
- Nice start of a trailer, try and make it a bit longer!
- I fault myself because I still haven't played the demo heeheh. But I gotta to tell ya I liked what I saw. You came prepared- and I think it should have been called "everybody's quest" because it's such a refreshing idea. It was one of the few trailers/clips where I just had to rewatch it several times due to how unique it seemed. For that- thank you! That said, it was a little too short to fully appreciate the game :3
PitchYaPitch Tweet
https://twitter.com/PixelSlop/status/1452864454169960448?s=20
Press Kit Link (DevLog Update)
https://nobodys-quest.tiiny.site/
Itch.io Game URL (DevLog Update)
https://pixelslop.itch.io/nobodys-quest
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