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Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I think it is the silence but I was speechless too. I can't help help but also feel that it has a deeper message on the environment and animal cruelty.
It makes me tear up a bit...
Looks very intriguing and if it winds up with horror-mystery elements, you know who to look for ;)
Love the look and feel of the game! And a very unique premise.
Suggestions:
-- Polish the Trailer
-- Flesh out the Itch page content
-- This quote from your One Pager may be a better hook than the current tweet? Maybe try A/B roadtesting for clickthroughs from both?
When The River Runs Dry is a narrative driven adventure game, complete with mystical water powers and a quirky collection of animal friends -- all to be found on a journey to the summit.
-- The One Pager Press Kit is really handy. Personally I think an easy to access Google Doc like the Indie Legion Press Kit Lite is really good for quick info gathering, with links to other content being very useful. I haven't verified this with Content Creators so it's just an opinion but if you have all your info anyway it can't really hurt to have that accessible.
Feedback submitted as Indie Legion.
Press Kit needs concept art
Tweet is great, but maybe less text
Overall nice concept I just want to know more - so not a bad thing
Show more gameplay rather than UI
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