Alright, so I took a shot at your game. I can definitely see you are a Finn :). The basic premise seems good, you are a firefighter and help normal citizens when they are threatened by fires. I liked the fact that Juho took the time to explain the reasoning of your actions, like that normal citizens should run away when confronted with fire and not stay (in the firemens' way).

There were some inconsistencies with mapping, but nothing that jars game play too much. I liked the H2O use instead of MP, but I'd like to have to have another method of attacking, perhaps stomping with boots? (I don't know if this becomes an option, as I could only afford to play for thirty minutes and played to the point where I could recruit the constable). This also would work better against the thief you encounter, as I cannot fathom firemen using the water hose against people.

I liked the references to Finnish culture, and I laughed a little when you could buy either normal bread (heals moderate HP) or rye bread (which heals full HP). I think no other country loves rye bread as we Finns do (yes, I am a Finn as well).

The game definitely shows some promise, and I like the fact that it is educational. Keep up the good work, and congratulations on finishing your game! (so far)

Secret Santa Review! Like with my other Secret Santa Reviews, I take notes as I play the game so you get a "real time" reaction to what I am experiencing with your game! Here it goes...

Tiny resolution! RPG Maker VX Ace has such ridiculously small resolution. Time to upgrade to MV!

Ok, no context in the beginning – just start off right in a room with no explanation of controls or anything – maybe that comes soon? Luckily the controls are not difficult.

Met my inferior doppleganger, Juha! Not sure what engaging Easy Mode does, so I am leaving that alone for now.

These stairs on the left don’t go anywhere! Back in 5^th and 6^th grade I went to school in a very old and creepy building that had stairs just like this!

I tried walking into the far-right room and some random person yelled gibberish at me.

Talked to Minerva, determined she was the random person yelling gibberish at me. She demands respect! Sorry Minerva, respect is earned, not given freely!

She asked me if Kaj explained everything to me, but I have no clue who Kaj is. I am going to go ahead and say No.

Oops… I tried walking out of the house without talking to who I assume was Kaj first… he immediately joined my party and I never got to talk to him. I guess I can say that I am ready then…?

Minerva tells me that the green roofed house is on fire, but no street address! I hope it is the only house with a green roof in the town! If this house was on fire the whole time that I have been bumbling around, I would have hoped the boss would have let me know about it!

Walking out of the house, I get scrolling text “For my dear Godson…” And that is it… was there supposed to be more? Or was it more like a dedication? (I realize this is a dedication now, after reading some info here). Also, the first thing I see when walking out of the house is… a house with a green roof! It is definitely not on fire, though. There are a couple of houses with green roofs, none are on fire.

Ahhhh found it, the house is on fire only on the inside! Sneaky fire! I humbly suggest maybe making smoke come out of the windows or something to let the player know the proper location of the fire. Since the game is aimed at a younger target audience, giving visual cues is vitally important.

Damnit Pavel! You are a terrible boy! At least he is self-chastising. The kid wants to help put out the fire he started. What could go wrong, having a minor pyromaniac join the firefighters?

Oh dang, I am literally battling the fire! I also just noticed that the fire on the beds is not animated.

Pavel just took a face full of smoke and instantly died. Well, I guess that is what he gets for starting the fire in the first place.

Ok I put out all the fire and… nada? No direction where to go from here. I guess I will go back to the firehouse?

Hah, Minerva just called me out for letting a child help put out the fire – good! Child labor laws are in place for a reason, and I just opened up the fire department to a possible lawsuit from the kid’s parents (especially since he DIED WHILE HELPING ME).

Why do I have to go introduce myself to everyone in town? I am the fireman, shouldn’t I already know these people? The real question is, why do I want to know them?! As the player, I really don't want to go talk to these people, but I guess I have to!

I went to Mette’s house and some lady is screaming French at me. Juho says “I cannot understand my sister’s language” – is this actually his sister? If so, why do they speak different languages?

And I randomly get a free rye bread from somewhere. I won’t (and apparently can’t) turn down free magical bread!

I just met the mayor! He also demands respect! Sorry buddy, like I told the boss lady, you gotta earn it first! Now he’s bragging about his wife and kids. I haven’t even met them yet, mister! 

Met the wife, she also likes to brag about the kids.

Damn, the mayor’s son is definitely gifted! He plays a song on the piano that incorporates synthesized drums and horns!

In the mayor’s house I am seeing…6 beds, though only four people apparently live there, and only 3 meal place settings! Who is being shunned from supper? I am assuming the daughter since she is stubborn and the son is a wizard at the piano.

Went into the warehouse on the south-west side of town. It looks like you used table auto tiles where walls should go.

Oh sweet, you can buy food at the warehouse – I always trust food from strangers hiding out in warehouses!

I went into the warehouse that has all the boxes of corn – no clue what is up, I got the option to “grind for cash” or find something valuable. I opted to find something valuable since cash grinds are never fun. Then nothing happened. I can’t seem to interact with anything in here.

Went back to the firehouse, not sure what else there is to do.

Ah, my boss is ready to feed me and put me to bed! What a great boss! She is slowly earning my respect. Will she… will she really let me have ice cream for dinner? Let’s see…

Hah! I get to have ice cream and Kaj can have his gross cabbage rolls!

After sleeping, I can magically go up to the exercise room now, that is what is at the top of the stairs!

OH DAMN THE EXERCISE ROOM IS ON FIRE!

Time to start day 2… Some random chick named Spara arrived? I don’t see her anywhere.

Minerva, always demanding respect.

Ok, now I have no clue where to go or what to do… Minerva just tells me to stop wasting time, but I have no idea what is on fire.

Ah, found the fire in the western-most building! More bed fires! Why do people enjoy setting fire to their beds so much?

I also find it funny that I can literally just run away from the flames.

There, fire is out – another day, another heroic deed.

Spara wants the emergency number… Yeah, I ain’t giving her the real one. She can just, you know, not start her bed on fire next time.

Interesting, no matter what number you give her, it correlates to a country. Nice touch!

Pavel is gone and dead, yet my pay keeps getting docked! This must be what paying child support feels like.

Time to eat and sleep again… will the boss lady let me have ice cream two nights in a row for supper? Let’s find out…

Success! I am the greatest fireman ever!

Day 3! Time to deliver the mail to a guy who can’t speak English but can read it!

AHA! I found Pavel, not dead at all, hiding in the inn in the next town over! I talked to him and… he vanished… I think this was not Pavel at all, but perhaps his ghost… His ghost has not forgiven me for letting him die in the fire that he started after I agreed to let him help me knowing full-well that he was a minor and not a professional and ate a face full of smoke and suffocated.

I see the architects of this town also enjoy putting stairs to nowhere in their buildings!

Found the constable. He gave me a letter for Minerva… hmm… secret love letters, perhaps?

Ok, why is it that the crazy looking dude in a turban is a bad guy?! Hmmmm?! Also, why am I, a firefighter, chasing a robber, when the constable is right there?

A random fight in complete blackness! Whaaaaaaat?!

Spray that bandit with your hoses! This feels like a… *puts on sunglasses* watered down version of Ghostbusters! Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

So apparently I blasted the robber so much with the water hose that he fell through the floor. That’s how we do things in my town. Steal bread, get wrecked.

I magically teleported back to Minerva, who then magically teleported me to another town with a fire. I am low on precious H20 from spraying down the robber.

After putting the fire out, a girl magically appeared out of thin air! Another ghost, perhaps?

Ah, Kaj dropping the knowledge like it’s… *puts on sunglasses again* hot! Yeaaaaaaaaaaaah!

I like these little “The More You Know” information snippets about fire safety.

Minerva gave me my pay and I didn’t have to pay for Pavel’s dead body! YAY!

Oh boy, oh boy, dinner time again… ok…. Can it happen? Three nights in a row? Ice cream?

Success! I am in love with Minerva because she lets me have ice cream for dinner all the time. All. The. Time.

Ok, day four… starting off with some crazy music here! Jani, what have you done to the fish warehouse?! What is up with the abnormal fire?!

Are you f’n kidding me Jani? You want to pay me to put out the fire in your warehouse with a DICTIONARY?! Oiii. Fine! I better get some ice cream after this.

It has not happened yet, but I am curious what happens when you run out of H20.

Ok, time to tackle the BLUE FLAME!

This ain’t no regular fire! It’s the ROOT OF ALL EVIL! Time to crank up the hoses to 11, boys. Dang, it nearly killed me, but it was not enough. I defeated the root of all evil like the ice cream destroying machine that I am.

Oh wait… It’s not over, here comes NERO! He does have a point about the fish, it does taste and smell better when cooked.

I am plunged into battle while I have like… almost 0 HP on my characters. Luckily I have some rye bread.

Nero singes horrendously, hah!

I am now out of H20 and I can’t fight him. There is literally no way to progress now. I don't recall any save prompts anywhere in the game so I would have to start all over from the beginning now.

Ok, so this is an interesting first attempt! I enjoy the theme of fire safety, but as a game (especially targeted for a younger audience) it definitely needs some work! Visual cues are vitally important to indicate where to go and what to do - add smoke to houses that are on fire, animate the fire (turn stepping on), etc. 

Combat overall is easy until you (well, I) am thrust into a no-win situation. In the warehouse I had to battle through multiple regular battles, then root of all evil boss that depletes my health and H20, only to have to fight ANOTHER boss immediately after with no chance to recover my resources? Since this is for kids and the idea is to teach fire safety, do not put them in a position where they will easily lose like this. It can be frustrating and detrimental to the overall goal!

At any rate, I hope you keep working on it and polish it up for your godson! Great job!

Let me begin by saying this game does seem like a first-time project by someone new to RPG Maker. Therefore, the game uses a lot of out-of-the-box settings and graphics. Having said that, this game has many novel ideas! And it’s an education game about fire safety! Very unique. I especially liked how you can get punished by asking the boy to help you on the job. XD

Here’s a simple breakdown:

PROS

• It’s an education game that teaches fire safety! I do think it’s probably the first RPG Maker game of this kind.
• Some very unique ideas. Such as you can choose different ways of leveling up every night by choosing what kind of food to eat for dinner.
• It’s a relatively easy game that you can go through in about an hour with a little grinding.

CONS

• A beginner project which uses mostly default graphics and settings.
• A little rough with some minor bugs and errors, but nothing game breaking.
• Battle is very basic and straightforward, which is actually a PRO if the gamer is younger.

SOME FIXES

• The beginning tutorial part should probably be more guided with Autorun events as there’s a good chance players might miss some critical event.
• Minerva’s dialogue in fire station that wasn’t translated, even with dictionary.
• Duplicate items (letters, etc.) if you keep talking to quest giver. You can use a Has Item or switch conditional to prevent this.
• The dirty dishes graphic doesn’t have a transparent background
• After getting easy mode Juha (which is a nice feature btw), Juha shouldn’t appear in the fire station anymore.

SUGGESTIONS FOR MAKING RPG MAKER GAMES FOR KIDS

You mentioned that originally you planned to make this game for your 4-year-old godson. I think there’s a few things you can do in RPG Maker to make games more toddler friendly. One, make more use of Play SE. You can play silly sound effects when the character interacts with certain things. Also, instead of displaying text dialogue you can play voice recorded dialogues by you and other family members. While we adults roll our eyes at amateur voice acting, I must say toddlers get a kick out of hearing familiar voices. I’m sure he’ll love hearing your voice act out the lines. The other thing is instead of using the battle system, perhaps you could design the battles like mini games where the player can put out fires on the screen using point and click. Maybe have them match colors or letters to make it more challenging. RPG Maker even works with a touch screen if you have one of those installed. And make more use of the Play Animation on screen to make some funny animations/hidden easter eggs for kids to discover. It can be more interactive storybook like perhaps.

Anyways, just some of my suggestions. Right now the game is quite appropriate for kids a little older. Congratulations on making a kid friendly game!

Reivew:

Quick thoughts: Considering this game was made in VX Ace Lite, it was an enjoyable game. It needs a lot of polish, but has some interesting and fun concepts, and with an expanded version with some more customization, it could be a lot of fun.

Pros:

• The themes of fire safety are rather neat. Since the game is made for children I thought that was a rather nice inclusion.
• The H20 system is very simple, but nice. I like the concept. With some tweaking it can improve greatly.
• Considering the target audience, the game will prove to be fun for children without being too difficult.

Cons:

• Some of the map design is a bit off. For example, in the firehouse, the tables in the hallway are actually on the wall, rather than on the floor. Another example is the secondary character in the room on the left that you can add to your party doesn't disappear after adding him.
• Also, if there are more than 4 people in the party, the game gives no indication that the formation must be changed for the 5th character to be available.
• There was a point in the game where I couldn't advance. After locking all the robbers in prison, I was left with no real idea of what to do from there. There needs to be more clarification about where to go. Also, returning to the prison returns the events to being outside of their prison cells. Maybe have a switch that keeps them there?

In the end, I had fun with it. With some polish this could be a rather fun game for kids to discover things about fire safety.

Juho's Fire Adventures, A Review (Updated)

The Short: The game has some interesting principles, but needs a lot of polish. Most glaring, I was unable to complete it due to a broken map (after the developer clarified that there is a hidden moving event which you need to stumble upon I was able to continue).

Pros:

• Consequences to choices. Bringing a kid to a fire seemed like a bad idea, and it was.
• Some nice incorporation of foreign language (French) as a game play element (although I never found the dictionary needed to translate it in game). I also liked the PSA about emergency numbers.
•  The battle gimmick of expending H20 (mp) to fight fires feels consistent with the theme (although this could be much more developed and difficulty could be increased).
• A couple puzzles, which were not particularly challenging, but diversified the gameplay.

Cons:

• Unbeatable - at least based on my single play through. On day 3 of the game, the characters see a thief, and then are teleported after him into an abandoned house. After thoroughly exploring the small house, I could find no way out of it and nothing to do in it. So either I missed something, or the event is broken. In any case,  I quit at that point.
• Needs a lot of polish. For instance, trying to enter a room in the firehouse triggers an untranslated Finnish text. Or, during the tour of the town, there is a skipped sequence. The image for the dirty dishes shows its background layer, instead of being transparent.  On the firehouse map , a duplicate of the firehouse can be seen at the edge of the screen (presumably the night version of the station, which for some reason shares the same map).  A number of NPCs can be talked with infinitely, giving items/etc. There are lots of little things along these lines, which ultimately
• Characters are rather undeveloped and the city is pretty lifeless.  Anyone who is in authority in the game demand that the player respect them and be impressed by them, which seems like a poor leadership trait... Although maybe this is a critique of a certain current leader.
• Really easy combat, with the exception of the first boss encounter, which seemed like a major difficulty spike. Also it would be nice to have some way to clear blindness (or maybe I missed it?), since this effect is used by almost all enemies, and makes battles more tedious, with no way to clear it.

It's a game with some heart, but needs a lot of work still.