Looks nice.

I had to refresh the page a couple of times before it let "z" start the game. The intro is looong and there doesn't appear to be a way to skip it, reading it once wasn't too bad, but after that, it was just a reason to not play again, the third time, well, let's just say there wasn't a fourth. 

Looked nice, seemed it like would be a good game. Keep up the good work!

The art and music is great.

Didn't feel the juice at all, but I understand it's an unfinished game and there wasn't time to add everything you wanted.

Anyways, if you update it I will definitely play it. Good entry!

What a charming game. Very juicy text and great art. Great design on the first few parts of the level. Would have loved to see what would come next.

Great presentation, the player control feels a bit stiff

Unfortunately could not get the game to start in browser or installed.  Tried hitting most buttons on keyboard and clicking around.  

For some reason I can't get this to play at all. Maybe an issue with Web GL

It looks extremely polished and the art style is very good!

I am still a bit confused at the enemies, should I jump over them? should I phase out when they attack? It's also a bit frustrating to have to start from the beginning and have to go through all the text again.

But the presentation is still amazing, good job!

Felt pretty good to play, but I expected the dash to make you go in a straight line without falling. And yeah, there's a lot of text in the start. You could look for some way to show the controls better at the start as well. The mechanic of the health of the player being shown as the light around them looks like it has potential for some interesting things. Unfortunately, I can't really say if the game is good from this much. The art is nice though.

You should spread your text on several encounters. It’s a bit much for a starter.

Your movement is pretty good. Noticed the coyote time and slopes…

Good job!

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