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A jam submission

LaurenceView game page

A short game and story of a man and his mind.
Submitted by Wolfe87 (@dkswolfe) — 49 minutes, 36 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Theme#203.9093.909
Overall#233.8183.818
Visuals#254.0004.000
Gameplay#383.3643.364
Audio#533.2733.273

Ranked from 11 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted

Great game! I really love it! Maybe in future add more endings and etc.

Developer(+1)

Thank you! That is defintely a good idea. Cheers

Submitted

As soong as I started it, windows blocked it and even when I overrided it, it asked for an admin password because "the app wants to make changes to the harddrive"

Developer

Yo it's my bad on building it as an installer and not as a ZIP. Mistake on my part and lessons learned. Apologies about that.

Submitted

Very neat artstyle and unique storytelling. While playing I felt the game would be even stronger if you could take more decisions!

Developer

Thank you and I 100% agree with you. I originally wanted to do branching paths with some more exploration and decision making but my lack of knowledge turned me away from that. Figured out ways to do it on the day of submission but I 100% agree.

Thank you for your kind words and constructive feedback :)

Submitted

Great story, i was hooked the whole way through

Developer(+1)

Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it!

Submitted

Great story telling and awesome visuals! I love the weak colors too :D  Keep it up~ and great job turning in a super cool game.  Please check out mine if you havent.

Developer

Thank you. I checked yours out and enjoyed it :)

Submitted

Very nice! I just wish there was a way to skip through the dialogue.

Developer

Thank you and excellent suggestion and something I defintely did not think of at the time.

Submitted

This is the neatest pixel art ive seen! I like the contrast between the player and his surroundings!!

Developer

Thank you, honestly that was a happy little accident. I was orginally going to do "realistic" colours but I just ended up doing this and I am super glad I did :) 

Your game is beautiful.

Submitted

awesome job! really enjoyed it! overall, 4/5 :)

Developer

Thank you! I enjoyed yours too!

Submitted (2 edits)

Very fun and interesting game, the visuals really help tie the story together.

Developer

Thanks my dude, glad you enjoyed it.

This game was short and intriguing. The story is very subtly shown while progressing through different scenes, and the ending really pieces everything together. I like the color scheme because it really gives that creepy, monotone element that shows the state of mind the character has, as well as distortions in rooms that in a way show chaos that the characters mind currently is.

Over all it's definitely worth playing and I'm looking forward to other games from this dev.