I really like this, it was adorable, and I like the big bad man with a mustache. I would have loved to see more with the fairy, but I can absolutely imagine the dog painting and that's cute
This game is so cute. I picked every choice I think Maggie would have made. I loved the narrative and dialogue. I don't have any critiques because the game ran great for me and the story was immersive. The colors were great too. Wonderful job woof.
I really love your use of color and the font works really well for the tone of this story! I loved the choices, it definitely felt like the decisions I made were reflected in the outcomes in the story. I really liked the man I thought it was funny I could just ask for belly rubs and he kinda just chills out for a moment lol.
My only criticism is there were some spelling errors but not much else! I also was not exactly sure what was going on or what was the central point of the game? But that may have been due to the choices I made.
Very cute game! I played through it multiple times to get the Befriend Fairy, Go Home, and Faries' rule endings! I love the early interaction showing the dog's reaction to the Fairy's words. "Dog, I know that word! I don't know the other words but I get it somehow!!!" It's absolutely adorable.
First of all the color and font choices are impeccable. The story was so adorable but also got me heated at times. I was genuinely so mad at that art critic guy. Who the heck destroys a painting made by a dog? I laughed at how the fairy had such high expectations for the dog and kept getting let down. Both NPCs had goals that were just the right amount of silly. I like how the dog was just hanging out and doing dog things, but maybe you could add a bit more personality to it. Like after we got into the secret room, the dog didn't seem to react strongly to anything or have a clear goal
I really like how much the game made me feel like a dog. Describing the imagery that a dog would sense, where you always notice smells, there are words that you hear often enough to know, I felt very doglike and I am a big fan of being a dog. This one made me smile and laugh a lot. The writing was very expressive and I liked the humor. I also really liked the ridiculous man and he seems like someone I would see handing out flyers on campus about conspiracy theories or something. I don't have much criticism, but I feel like maybe it would benefit the game to be able to see more of the track you are headed on based on the choices you make.
I loved the game! I thoroughly enjoyed the dog roleplaying I could do. I liked how the fairy could show its darker (maybe true?) side if you pick options it doesn't like. My only critique is it's not obvious to me what else the game is tracking besides the fairy's attitude. Other than that, I enjoyed it a lot! I wanna bite the man again haha.
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I really like this, it was adorable, and I like the big bad man with a mustache. I would have loved to see more with the fairy, but I can absolutely imagine the dog painting and that's cute
Positives: Enjoy the color palette, also enjoy playing as a dog, the tone is fun/light, also the comment about the evil mustached man was great.
Negatives: Would have enjoyed a bit more connection with the dog and the fairy.
This game is so cute. I picked every choice I think Maggie would have made. I loved the narrative and dialogue. I don't have any critiques because the game ran great for me and the story was immersive. The colors were great too. Wonderful job woof.
I really love your use of color and the font works really well for the tone of this story! I loved the choices, it definitely felt like the decisions I made were reflected in the outcomes in the story. I really liked the man I thought it was funny I could just ask for belly rubs and he kinda just chills out for a moment lol.
My only criticism is there were some spelling errors but not much else! I also was not exactly sure what was going on or what was the central point of the game? But that may have been due to the choices I made.
Very cute game! I played through it multiple times to get the Befriend Fairy, Go Home, and Faries' rule endings! I love the early interaction showing the dog's reaction to the Fairy's words. "Dog, I know that word! I don't know the other words but I get it somehow!!!" It's absolutely adorable.
First of all the color and font choices are impeccable. The story was so adorable but also got me heated at times. I was genuinely so mad at that art critic guy. Who the heck destroys a painting made by a dog? I laughed at how the fairy had such high expectations for the dog and kept getting let down. Both NPCs had goals that were just the right amount of silly. I like how the dog was just hanging out and doing dog things, but maybe you could add a bit more personality to it. Like after we got into the secret room, the dog didn't seem to react strongly to anything or have a clear goal
I really like how much the game made me feel like a dog. Describing the imagery that a dog would sense, where you always notice smells, there are words that you hear often enough to know, I felt very doglike and I am a big fan of being a dog. This one made me smile and laugh a lot. The writing was very expressive and I liked the humor. I also really liked the ridiculous man and he seems like someone I would see handing out flyers on campus about conspiracy theories or something. I don't have much criticism, but I feel like maybe it would benefit the game to be able to see more of the track you are headed on based on the choices you make.
I loved the game! I thoroughly enjoyed the dog roleplaying I could do. I liked how the fairy could show its darker (maybe true?) side if you pick options it doesn't like. My only critique is it's not obvious to me what else the game is tracking besides the fairy's attitude. Other than that, I enjoyed it a lot! I wanna bite the man again haha.