This is hilarious. Sally having the most insane reactions to everything is so realistic and honestly scary. I love how the tone shifted from lighthearted banter to actual violence. You did a great job characterizing her. The use of color and the texting passage was super effective. I did not see it coming that this was all due to meds, but it made sense as a twist. My only criticism is that sometimes the choices seemed similar, like I didn't feel they would have much impact on branching. Also the ending I got said I had blown off Chase, but I thought I had answered him every time. Overall this was really fun!
The presentation of this game is great and reflects the tone of the story and characters really well.If anything could be improved it would probably be to have more differences between endings and story paths given that both endings are a car pulling up and you talking about love of chase and taking your meds it just feels like both end up in the same place despite superficial differences. this is a great concept and i felt like it was well executed, particularly the gradual reveal of sally's violence and true nature.
Really cool visuals and a great twist hidden in the title! I was a bit confused halfway through the story when I mixed up the names of Jesse and Chase, lol. Of course, that's my bad, but it did result in me both texting back Chase while flirting with Jesse, which made me feel like a total jerk... until the twist. Now I feel more like I was just struggling as much as I could.
The plot twist was so crazy! I loved this game so much!! All of the characters felt believable, I've had friends like Sally personally so I got a good chuckle out of that. Only thing I noticed is when it should say Friday evening, it says Thursday evening, (I think that's unintended anyways.) I love the progression of the characters. Super amazing work!
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This is hilarious. Sally having the most insane reactions to everything is so realistic and honestly scary. I love how the tone shifted from lighthearted banter to actual violence. You did a great job characterizing her. The use of color and the texting passage was super effective. I did not see it coming that this was all due to meds, but it made sense as a twist. My only criticism is that sometimes the choices seemed similar, like I didn't feel they would have much impact on branching. Also the ending I got said I had blown off Chase, but I thought I had answered him every time. Overall this was really fun!
The presentation of this game is great and reflects the tone of the story and characters really well.If anything could be improved it would probably be to have more differences between endings and story paths given that both endings are a car pulling up and you talking about love of chase and taking your meds it just feels like both end up in the same place despite superficial differences. this is a great concept and i felt like it was well executed, particularly the gradual reveal of sally's violence and true nature.
Really cool visuals and a great twist hidden in the title! I was a bit confused halfway through the story when I mixed up the names of Jesse and Chase, lol. Of course, that's my bad, but it did result in me both texting back Chase while flirting with Jesse, which made me feel like a total jerk... until the twist. Now I feel more like I was just struggling as much as I could.
The plot twist was so crazy! I loved this game so much!! All of the characters felt believable, I've had friends like Sally personally so I got a good chuckle out of that. Only thing I noticed is when it should say Friday evening, it says Thursday evening, (I think that's unintended anyways.) I love the progression of the characters. Super amazing work!