First of all the color and font choices are impeccable. The story was so adorable but also got me heated at times. I was genuinely so mad at that art critic guy. Who the heck destroys a painting made by a dog? I laughed at how the fairy had such high expectations for the dog and kept getting let down. Both NPCs had goals that were just the right amount of silly. I like how the dog was just hanging out and doing dog things, but maybe you could add a bit more personality to it. Like after we got into the secret room, the dog didn't seem to react strongly to anything or have a clear goal