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Gonna level with ya, I don't know what I just played but I liked the aesthetic. Seems like a really early demo, it was just the entrance and a big hell room sprawling with enemies. Lemme know if I missed something.
The X's and O's in the doors are there to mark whether or not they can be entered, since I'm only using one-way doors for the sake of not having to worry too much about story flags. You're not the only one confused by them, though! There's gotta be a much better way to do that on my part, lol. Also, I just noticed I forgot to mark which key enters doors in the description.
Thanks for the playthrough! I don't have very much raw footage of this game, so it helps a lot.
Brand New Demo Revision!
Cutscenes, Gameplay Tweaks, and Fixes Oh My!
It has little to do with the game itself, but the old cover just wasn't doing it for me. The "poorly drawn main character superimposed onto some background art from the game" look, in my opinion, is overplayed, so I made a new one with a bit more originality to it. This one has a strong image of "crap, that otter boy's being menaced by a giant snail. Adventure ensues!"
The only thing the old one tells me is "this game has a weasel-faced monstrosity who, at one point, stands in front of a forest."
New... Ish Title Screen!
The title screen is largely unchanged, except for the different logo. I wanted to do something special with it, but I couldn't think of anything in time. Oh well. Purple gradients are okay... right?
The HUD, however, has had a big revision. Instead of a standard green health bar next to an off-model drawing of Garret, I have a gear symbol. It meshes well with the cogs you collect, I think. HP is also represented with text under the bar, just so you know exactly how you're doing. Also, the Instance Count/FPS counters have been moved to the top-right corner of the screen. This is so they don't cover up another HUD element.
Speaking of the Instance Count, it most likely won't be in the full game. It's something I use to keep track of how many objects are on the screen. I use it to make sure nothing's making infinite clones of itself in an attempt to take over the world or something.
Don't get used to this HUD, by the way. They tend to not stick around.
Cutscenes? More like CUTE-SCENES, HAHA.
I guess "cutscenes" is kind-of a stretch. They're more like "brief confrontations that just so happen to have textboxes." They add a bit of character to the game, so they're welcome in my eyes. Now you actually have a goal to accomplish beyond just "go right."
The textboxes are themed after some tacky stationery. The theme of the stationery is "The Great Westlouia Line," a railroad that runs all the way across the country of Westlouia. It's the only sensible way to make it to Garret's hometown of Pivot.
Boss Fight Improvements!
In all honesty, the boss fight from the last demo was a DISASTER. If you want a master-class in how NOT to make a boss fight, look no further than the last boss fight. It introduces new mechanics out of nowhere, it's a pain to even hit, it's confusing, it has too much health...
This new one makes a lot more sense, at the cost of being somewhat easy. Every attack it does is shared by an enemy you meet earlier in the level, so you already have some idea how to fight it going in.
I also stuck a scene before and after the fight, just to give it come context. Overall I think it's much more enjoyable.
And That's It for Now!
If you want, give it a try, here:
If you have any complaints, comments, whatever, feel free to tell me about them! There's lots of ways to contact me and keep track of the development of the game listed on the game's page, there. Thanks for reading this lengthy devlog!
Yep! There's a subtitle now. I figured "Last Train To Pivot" gave folks a bit more to latch onto with the title. I mean, what the hell's a "Westlouia?" Now, everyone knows what a Train is. I'll just have to assume they figure out that Pivot is a location.
More to Come!
Now that the demo's out featuring the tutorial level, I'm working on some more levels to explore. My main focus right now is a level called the Arctic Fjord.
The Arctic Fjord's design is all about skating on the ice. Unlike normal ground, you don't stop dashing when you're on ice. Don't worry, though, Garret can walk on the ice without any problems, unlike some other characters.
And don't worry about that snow barrier there. Garret's got enough speed to smash right through it!
Yet Another Update!
A few things were tweaked this time around. They're all quality-of-life and stability features.
A slider has been added to the Settings menu on the Pause screen that lets you adjust the amount of "particle" objects on the screen at once. This can be used to make the game less laggy on low-end computers. Heck, sometimes it even would lag on mine. If you look closely at the official screenshots, one is taken during a minor lag spike.
The Lying Checkpoint:
This checkpoint didn't work. At all. If you died after touching it, it would send you to the start of the level. The reason for this was because there was a door object that was overriding it. Whoops. Again.
This may seem like a lot of updates for one demo, but I have a nasty habit of letting bugs and issues stack up in earlier builds and haunt me until completion, leading to massive periods of fixing things. I'm trying to stay on top, right now.
That makes sense, actually. When it comes to paid content, the more clarity the better.
My friend's game probably made sense to be split up, since the Android Version and the Windows version were two totally different experiences.
I've never understood why people would have more than one page for more than one version of a game. This site lets you upload multiple builds at once, right? And yet, I still see people post separate pages for the Android and Windows versions. Without naming names, one game I've seen has one whole page for every demo build of the game they have, and each of those pages are so barebones that they might as well have condensed them all into one concise page.
Was there ever a point when Itch didn't let you have various builds? I know one guy who did it who simply didn't know about the feature.