You really captured the spooky nature of those strange and whimsical creatures. Such vivid description was enough to form an image in my head.
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Hole in the Wall Coffee's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Special Theme | #6 | 3.778 | 3.778 |
| Use Of Coffee | #15 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Game Design | #17 | 3.111 | 3.111 |
| Fun | #20 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Overall | #24 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Sound | #48 | 1.333 | 1.333 |
| Art | #49 | 1.889 | 1.889 |
Ranked from 18 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Got a little confused by the loop but overall the characters and writing are pretty solid. Certainly nails the spooky theme :)
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I Love My Dad - Coffee CafeI liked a lot the writing and the characters (specially the three raccoons in a trench coat). :)
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EMF (Electro-Manolo Fields)This is great. Loved the characters and actually laughed a couple of times!
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coffeePOCALYPSEI don’t think I got a single order ‘correct’ but I had a great time. Good writing that perfectly set a tone of uneasiness, loved it!
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Jeepers Creepers JavaThe writing is great, I felt so bad when I consistently disappointed customers. Really reminds me of when I was an actual barista.
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Pumpkin Spice MassacreThe writing is superb, really great. I felt completely immersed in the game, and you showed that graphics are not necessary to make us feel the environment, which is very inspiring for people like me who love creating stories for games. It was a genuinely frightening and tense experience, even though we can replay it, the first time always carries a sense of mystery and constant tension, and you captured that perfectly. I chose all the options because I played it many, many times, and I really enjoyed every detail you included. Background music would greatly enhance the immersion, but that's not a problem because everything works perfectly. Congratulations on the game, I don't have enough words to describe how amazing I found the entire narrative.
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HallucinationThat is so kind of you to say! I really like writing things which create uncanny experiences and contradict themselves in fiction vs realism - spooky coffee was a perfect theme for this!
I really liked your game too, and I think you succeeded in creating a really creepy experience using very few components - the combination of short and simple written and visual clues worked brilliantly.
Thank you so much for the lovely considered feedback!
Wow, this was so eerie and well written! The creepy character descriptions paired with the nonchalant reaction of the main character really heightens the surreal vibe, and the way the game loops back on itself gives a strange feeling of deja vu. It reminds me of some weird fiction writers like China Mieville or Jeff Vandermeer. I'd love to have some form of music or sound effects to heighten the mood. But as it stands, great work!
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Monsters & Mochas (Work in Progress)very creepy indeed! The character descriptions are really well done.
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LATTE ARTIST halloween editionSo well written and creepy! I loved the character descriptions, and so funny at times (especially the first patron)
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