really cool writing! So atmospheric and eerie, I really like the aesthetics blending the old house with more spartan technological/computer imagery.
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This was really fun! Thank you for making this cool cento maker!
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My life, being made of four, with two alone
The summer's flower is to the summer sweet,
Both truth and beauty on my love depends;
When other petty griefs have done their spite,
Love is my sin, and thy dear virtue hate,
O! from what power hast thou this powerful might,
The sea, all water, yet receives rain still,
But that wild music burthens every bough,
And take thou my oblation, poor but free,
Till whatsoever star that guides my moving,
And yet by heaven, I think my love as rare,
The sun itself sees not, till heaven clears.
That beauty still may live in thine or thee
Give warning to the world that I am fled.
This was so cool! Such a lovely break from the world, I am excited to return and explore more :)
thank you for making this!
when they come back
And yet, there's still so much to be done
With grey winter cloud.
The Earth and I and One
with small rivers of ink streaming away from it
Cell phones, cellular tablets, and cellular
answering, as with a click beetle, the rotary
All those days we could keep
my thoughts flew to geese dumps and the numbers
Some day, this beach too —
When they come back — if Blossoms do —
peopling the centers and distances, the faraway
Sparrows scurrying
Unknown their resting-place.
I really liked this! So many cool tricks to make the world feel in depth - I loved the point of view changes between the map/overworld and the exploration places. The avatar and room changes were really clever, especially the trick you used to make the character 'push' the wheelbarrow - felt really smooth and natural! The use of colours and art were really nice also. Definitely look forward to a full version!








