Nice game, but controls could be a bit more crisp.

Really cute and charming theme with a nice execution across the board! Of course some gameplay feel and control things could be tweaked but I had a great time :)

Cool game with amazing art and music ! I saw that you already got quite a lot of comments talking about how to improve the controls, I would like to suggest my spin on it :

- When holding an arrow key, the player begins in walk animation for a few frames, then automatically switch to run animation (no input needed)

- The Walking speed could gradually increase until it match the Running speed (but keep the acceleration quite fast, I don't want to wait too long before reaching my max speed)

- When jumping, always use the horizontal running speed (otherwise I have almost no control on where I land)

Not mandatory :

- I would love to be able to jump with the Up arrow key, and interact with Space. I think it would be more intuitive and like that I don't have to move my fingers to interact with the environment. 

Pretty cool game overall, well done !

The visuals are so good!!

Once upon a time... a jammer played your game and liked it very much :)
The art produced is really amazing for this short amount of time. The platformer needs a bit more work to give an even better game feel. Personnaly, I was always using sprint since the speed was too slow by default.

Still, I had fun to play! Great job!

Great Narrative, Tight Platforming, all around a package deal. Great Stuff!

A nice cosy game! Other than some issues trying to find the platforms which blended into the background, this felt really solid! The opening art was awesome too, good job!

I loved the idea to be the narrator, there is a very good level design. I'd preferred if there was a coyote jump in it because i've fallen so many times ^^"

I realy like the textures and the concept is also fun, but it was hard to navigate, also you can see those litle pieces of background trough the wall, i fix this by making the wall texture like this:

when  unity puts your texture in the game and it doesnt fit nicely it takes a bit for the edge of your texture. by extending this outside of the selected part it will do this with the good collor

The game had a really good concept, but I cannot flip to previous pages. Also I had issues finding out where to go since some of the blocks blended really well into the background. 

I enjoyed the art. I did find that I constantly held the sprint down, maybe the character's base speed being a little faster would be nice!

I did run into a bug where a skeleton spawned onto a staircase, so I couldn't proceed, but the platforming layouts up to that point were really nice and atmospheric.

I'm not sure I really get the theme of this game. It seems like we're playing an Indiana Jones type archaeologist rediscovering an old legend more than a narrator. Regardless, it's very well polished, I loved the pixel art, great job.

This is great! Especially the dabbing and sound in the beginning. You should do more of that!
Good job!

So well-polished, great job, love the animations. If you guys aren't already a dev team then you should be one XD