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A jam submission

Doctor AwayView game page

An apple a day keeps the Doctor Away is a 2D game developed for the Game Off 2022 game jam. Hope you enjoy :)
Submitted by dbuzon — 53 minutes, 2 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Theme interpretation#234.0834.083
Graphics#1733.2083.208
Audio#2942.4582.458
Gameplay#3092.3752.375
Overall#3392.4172.417
Innovation#3602.0832.083

Ranked from 24 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

GitHub repository
https://github.com/dbuzon/doctor-away

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Comments

Submitted

Hallo,

Thank you for sharing your game. I’ve already saved its RATING;

1. verified: GAME due to observed in SUBMISSIONS LIST; keyphrase: Play in browser; read: from GAME TITLE, “DOCTOR AWAY”

2. observed: noticeable background music; remembers: modernized version of super family computer games, keyphrase: Castlevania series; remembers: in ENDING tune, YAMAHA keyboard’s VIBRA-PHONE instrument setting; adds: MIDI tunes from pocket monsters (GameBoy)

3. verified: GAMEPLAY to be of using MACHINE GUN against incoming enemies; observed: noticeable use of Math techniques, e.g. Triangles, to identify the correct direction of the projectiles;

4. observed: classifying by created world select keyphrases, e.g. doctors, hospital, as enemies and enemy territory causes a noticeable variation in their understood correct significance

5. opts: for the following as BEST ENDING in this version; read: "...it's still incomplete. So far there's only one level, but I will add more in the future."



Thank you. Health!

Submitted(+1)

I love it when these clichés are taken literally. This could be the start of a cool adventure! 

Submitted(+1)

Very short, but the start of something very well made. Theme interpretation is absolutely on point

Developer

Thank you so much for playing!! :)

Submitted(+1)

Nice art & a very cute angry apple! ^^

Developer

Thank you!! ^^

Submitted(+1)

Good start to a fun game! The art is cute and fits the theme. As you stated its a bit short, but the foundation is there and it shouldn't be too hard to add more levels. It seems like the shooting sound is attached to the bullet object or something, because the sound stops when the bullet is destroyed. This often means that the shooting sound just cuts off which is a bit harsh. Overall nice start!

Developer(+1)

Thank you for the feedback!! I already fixed the bullet audio, but I'll wait until the voting ends to update it.

Submitted(+1)

This was a fun little game.  The graphics were great for a retro top down shooter and the music fit the game.  Nice job!

Submitted(+1)

 That was a very short, wild ride as a seriously pissed off apple.

(+1)

Lovely little game, keep going!

Submitted(+1)

Loved the art and music, great job on your first game. Keep making games!!

Submitted(+1)

All doctors defeated. Love the art and the music!

Submitted(+1)

Great job on your first game. You really nailed the theme interpretation, keep it up.

Submitted(+1)

For a first game you already got the basis right. The pixel art is good. You got a nice ambiance for the title screen,  I especially liked the "help" page, the control sprites are beautiful.

It's obviously a bit short and a few things could be improved. The one I would brought first would be to give the player some feedback so he knows he finished the level. Just a sound playing and maybe a message appearing.

Keep up the good work!

Submitted(+1)

I really like what you did with the theme. Very creative :)

I suggest you use a custom WebGL template like this one: https://github.com/greggman/better-unity-webgl-template

Developer

thank you for the advice 😊! I'm going to check It out later. I did have some problems when converting to webgl.

Submitted(+1)

Cool entry! And very cool for a first game, I wanted more! Congrats, and keep it up!

Developer

Thank youu!! I'm happy to know you liked It. I'm definitely gonna add more stuff to it. Stay tuned :)

Submitted(+1)

Great theme interpretation, for me it was the best point to mention here. Nice innovation, too!

Submitted(+1)

Great graphics and theme interpretation!

I noticed the sound effect when firing seems to cut off as soon as the bullet impacts, I'm guessing the audio source is probably attached to the bullet itself. Just in case this is useful to you: I usually find an audio source on the player / some other persistent object and using AudioSource.PlayOneShot is the easiest way to handle this sort of repeating sound effect.

Developer

thank you so much!! I was trying to figure out how to solve this problem. I'll be fixing that asap. Thanks again for the help and feedback 😊

Submitted(+1)

nice idea, expecting some more doctors !

Submitted(+1)

Just checking. Was floor 1 it, 'cuz I got all them annoying doctors... and then that's it, no more doctors, no more floors. I win?!

Developer

Yees you win!! Unfortunatly I didn't have time to make the winnig screen because of work and college 😢. But I'll add it later after the voting ends, I will also add more levels to the game too.