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A jam submission

Throught Carole's JournalView game page

Submitted by Dragondoe — 2 hours, 36 minutes before the deadline
Rated by 17 people so far
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Team Size
1

"Most Creative Usage of Anniversary Assets" Submission

Yes

Unity Affiliation

No

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Submitted(+1)

I really connected with the writing and the environment was user friendly which is so important. Controls and camera were done so good. You really took on the challenge to directly handle the theme. I really enjoyed this. 5/5

Submitted(+1)

I thought that 2 was missing until I read the comments. Nice story! I wish you best of luck in your game dev journey

Submitted(+1)

Nicely done, especially if you are just starting out. Nice story, enjoyed the writing. Keep it up!

I would love it if you can play and rate my game, cheers!

Submitted(+1)

great lore! nice writing, bro is like shakespere

Submitted(+1)

It's a great game with very nice story!

Submitted(+1)

Very captivating!  I  accidently skipped over 2 and read it last but  really enjoyed the story. The overall design and appearance is very cute. 

Submitted(+1)

Very cute story. Who knows what remains hidden behind those closed doors 😼Good job.

Submitted(+1)

I like the idea, and the character controller is very good. Good job :)

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Nice Game idea

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

I liked the narrative here and how the story reveals itself as you walk. One suggestion, perhaps the 'E' ui button should face the player, because it is very easy to miss them, especially when it doesn't always appear on the same environment object.

Also when I reached the end, I wasn't sure if something was supposed to happen as the game seemed to end a little bit abruptly and it's unclear if the story has concluded.

A minor bug: When you open a note when running, the running sound does not stop.

Submitted(+1)

I really like the idea of discovering the story through little or no dialogue and  clues a few subtle sound effects robot reactions could enhance the mood if you don’t want to add more visuals

Submitted(+1)

Cute robot with matching music! Great use of the Assets!