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Throught Carole's Journal's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Narrative design | #11 | 3.619 | 3.619 |
| Overall | #109 | 2.952 | 2.952 |
| Sound Design | #136 | 2.810 | 2.810 |
| Art | #151 | 2.952 | 2.952 |
| Uniqueness/Creativity | #188 | 2.762 | 2.762 |
| Fun Factor | #192 | 2.619 | 2.619 |
Ranked from 21 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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"Most Creative Usage of Anniversary Assets" Submission
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You're holding my curiosity! Did you place everything by yourself? Character movement, camera control, object interaction, the narrative - you're doing great!
I used a learning template, so the player is not mine. But I did the object interaction and the narrative !
Thank you !
Nicely done. Looking forward it :P
Thank you ! ^^
i like the SFX so good
What do you mean by SFX ? I don't think I used some
sound effects
For someone who’s new to gamedev and didn’t had much time I think you did an incredible job! Fun little narrative and a great looking scenery. Really well done, you really can be proud of this! :)
Aww thank you really much !!
The narrative is interesting. Is the character part of the unity assets?
Yes, I use a leaning template made by Unity for the Player. I customized it so we can read the page.
And that was the first time I write a story in english
I really connected with the writing and the environment was user friendly which is so important. Controls and camera were done so good. You really took on the challenge to directly handle the theme. I really enjoyed this. 5/5
Thank you ! I really appreciate that !
For the control and camera I use a learning template made by Unity so that help a lot
I thought that 2 was missing until I read the comments. Nice story! I wish you best of luck in your game dev journey
Oh I guess that page is really discreet ! I'm gonna fix that thanks !
Thank you ! I wish you the best in your journey too ! ^^
Nicely done, especially if you are just starting out. Nice story, enjoyed the writing. Keep it up!
I would love it if you can play and rate my game, cheers!
Thank you! I started game development in August and I guess web development experience has been helpful!
Sure ! ^^
great lore! nice writing, bro is like shakespere
Haha, don't exaggerate, I'm still learning english but thanks you !
It's a great game with very nice story!
Thanks !
You're welcome!!
Very captivating! I accidently skipped over 2 and read it last but really enjoyed the story. The overall design and appearance is very cute.
Thank you! I hope that finding it last didn't bother the story too much.
Very cute story. Who knows what remains hidden behind those closed doors 😼Good job.
Thank you !
Now I want to add more content in the game 😂
I like the idea, and the character controller is very good. Good job :)
I use the character controller from a learning template made by Unity but thank you ! ^^
Nice Game idea
Thanks !
I liked the narrative here and how the story reveals itself as you walk. One suggestion, perhaps the 'E' ui button should face the player, because it is very easy to miss them, especially when it doesn't always appear on the same environment object.
Also when I reached the end, I wasn't sure if something was supposed to happen as the game seemed to end a little bit abruptly and it's unclear if the story has concluded.
A minor bug: When you open a note when running, the running sound does not stop.
That a good idea, it will be easier to find
I'm gonna fix that, thanks !
I really like the idea of discovering the story through little or no dialogue and clues a few subtle sound effects robot reactions could enhance the mood if you don’t want to add more visuals
Thanks ! That a good idea, I take note !
Cute robot with matching music! Great use of the Assets!
Thank you !