Although the "Pack" theme was a really secondary thing here, It has a really nice athmosphere and kept me interested all the way to the end of it. I can sense that the art was done in a hurry, which is perfectly understandable for a 48h game jam, but the sound effects are on point.

My only complaint is that sometimes the text disappears in the art. would be nice to isolate it with a text box e or a semi transparent background. 

Really solid game, congratulations!

I like the game, nice story based game, cute art and good story! Continuation would be nice

(Warning : I didnt have a great recording software on my mobile, the sound quality is bad, sorry for that)

A cool little story this is.

Interesting setting and character.

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Summary:

Adherence to Theme 

• You are on the road with some things in your pack. The Story could've incorporated packing things a little more but it gets by just fine.

Game Design 

• it is a solid Visual Novel,made for mobile screens. That hurts us desktop cats a bit but it was playable very well on my screen, since the Ui was well designed.

Originality

• Highly original idea. Excellent work!

Style

• Some graphics seem to be unfinished, I guess you hit the same brick wall with time that I did with my art.
• What's there is pretty stunning and visually interesting, some sounds effects where a bit loud but not obnoxious (though I guess it was for dramatic effect), this is  not counting the excellent Ambiance sounds used.
• I liked that there are multiple pathways that branch off shortly but come back together quite well.

Overall:

I like this. It was interesting and enjoyable for what it did. Some more refined visuals and a continuation of the Story would be something I look forward to!

While there were a few technical problems, I'm really intrigued to see where the story will go. Can't wait till it's finished!

Loved the art, must have been a lot of drawing to get done in not much time :)