This was very entertaining! The camera made me uncomfortable, but the dialog was great. Glad I stuck it out to the end!
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Airborn Artistic II - A Second Take's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Originality | #1209 | 3.444 | 3.444 |
| Overall | #1946 | 2.956 | 2.956 |
| Fun | #2035 | 2.800 | 2.800 |
| Presentation | #2040 | 3.022 | 3.022 |
Ranked from 45 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does your game fit the theme?
Through the experience, we are forced to face all that is not up to us.
Did your team create the art for this game during the 48 hour time slot?
Yes
We created all art during the game jam
Did your team create the audio for this game during the 48 hour time slot?
Yes
We created all audio during the game jam
Comments
This game is interesting. I liked the controls and the characters, but there's a few things that need to be improved:
- The camera. It's really zoomed in, and the world is huge, so it's hard to see what's going on most of the time. Also, it almost follows the mouse too quickly and made me a little motion sick
- Things need to be more spread out. I could tell there were some funny characters and dialogue, but I couldn't stop and listen to them because i was flying around and they were too close together. It just seemed like a lot was happening at once
Nice work, though! I think this could be really neat with some polish.
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Whiz BladeThank you for your very thorough analysis and input! Unfortunately, it is often very hard to impart painful feelings to an audience without inflicting actual pain upon those we wish to reach with our message! Communication is hard, and often requires bypassing certain formalities that would otherwise prevent the raw (metaphorical) contact of our (metaphorical) flesh! Hopefully the lacklustre logos prophorikos didn't make your experience much too unfathomable!
I liked the character design, the cheaky copy writing and the concept as a whole. Great consistency with art style, felt it matched the games concept very well. Wish I could read more speech bubbles. I got big Earth Worm Jim feels, a great success in my eyes. I liked Owl Village so much i want to vacation there.
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