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The GameDev.tv Game Jam 2023 - Free Course For All Submissions!

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A jam submission

That Time in Marta's HeartView game page

Marta's adventure
Submitted by Ganjochef, Poroporostudio, stephderob, anariga (@anari_ga), RatchRint, UltimaBlaze, Andrea Huang, Francesca ~ Azali, Antonello Sgnaolin - Music Composer — 24 minutes, 30 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Aesthetics#54.5934.593
Story#144.1484.148
Music#313.9633.963
Sound#773.5193.519
Fun#863.7783.778
Theme#1074.0744.074
Mechanics#3293.0743.074

Ranked from 27 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How many people worked on this game total?
nine

Did you use any existing assets? If so, list them below.
https://sketchfab.com/3d-models/low-poly-pencils-8905e50d59b949d68b3bd831c01bc5e5

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fl4shSubmitted356 days ago(+1)

Such a lovely game with a touching story! I like the idea of the paper lying on the table, visual is so nice! Well done!

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Astral Lab Escape
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GanjochefDeveloper356 days ago(+1)

Thank you, we've worked a lot about the sense of the entire story, Marta is a children who deserves love and happiness! We're working to continue the game, so stay tuned for some news ;)

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ArswydSubmitted356 days ago(+1)

Great game, congratulations! A little unfortunate that the story is not finished, but good job, keep working on it!

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Riftwalker
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GanjochefDeveloper356 days ago

Thank you for your feedback, we're working to continue the development of the game, stay tuned for some news! ;)

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baron_elmwichSubmitted356 days ago(+1)

What a cool game! Great story, and I thought the 2d elements in 3d were really creative. Great job on all the animations and cinematics!

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Flush The Spirits Out
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GanjochefDeveloper356 days ago (1 edit)

Thank you for your feedback, we appreciate you've enjoyed the game, hope you'll follow our updates and news about the project, stay tuned! ;)

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ch1w1Submitted357 days ago(+1)

what a lovely tale! great execution and performance. i have a bug where the game crash whhen mum tell us to go to sleep. also the idle camera sometime make me somehow dizzy because it moves a lot. overall grat game! continue developing it! 

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Pawfinder
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GanjochefDeveloper357 days ago (2 edits)

Thank you for your feedback, we're working to fix something outside! We didn't find the bug you've mentioned in your comment, we're working to check it! Stay tuned for more updates, we're working to continue the develop of the game :)

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adoankimSubmitted357 days ago(+1)

Such a lovely tale ♥️, I like the narrative and how the visuals help to tell the history. Also the use of drawings to tell Marta's story and feelings is quite interesting and everything holds together. Amazing job!

Hope on the next chapter the heart pieces join again🙏.

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Eru Bicha
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GanjochefDeveloper357 days ago (1 edit)

Thank you so much, we appreciate you loved the story and the game! We’re working on the next chapters and levels of the game, stay tuned for some news ☺️

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aquietknightSubmitted357 days ago(+1)

Wow this was stunning! Unfortunately I didn't get to play very much as I seemed to be unable to hand in the snowman parts to mum!


Nobody else seems to have mentioned it so it must be something to do with my system, which is a shame because I really wanted to see the rest of it!

The art style is beautiful! I particularly loved stepping between the pages to get to different sections of the level, that was a nice touch. Great music and engaging gameplay from what I saw (loved the snowball fight).

Really impressed, great work!

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The Babu
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GanjochefDeveloper357 days ago

Thank you for your feedback! You needed to click on each snowman parts in your inventory and press the button “E” near the mother to build the snowman! We hope that you’ll re-play the game and you’ll go on to the end ☺️

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aquietknightSubmitted355 days ago

Of course! I was being a dummy. Went back and played it through to the end, now I'm sad! Beautiful game though, I loved it

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Jonnboy91Submitted357 days ago(+1)

The whole story was so beautiful and the artworks was perfectly fitting for the music and everything. I absolutely loved it! Artwork beautifully portraited the 2 dimensions, which I loved, since it doesn't just have to be gameplay itself doing it. 

I'm very angry at you though, how dare you end the story there... You better continue this one and tag me once it's done! Having a small daughter myself (bit over 1.5y old), this made me tear up. Everything just worked with this.

Only critique would be the start, why have the little girl walk all over there so slowly, when you could have just let the player do the walking and explore that way a bit more. Also I think what really would have made the game pop (obviously understand that time pressure making this much already must have been enormous), but some small interactions or even just SFX when you went to look at like the little bird on the log or something, which would have made exploring the area a bit more interesting as well :) 

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The Struggles Within
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GanjochefDeveloper357 days ago (1 edit) (+1)

Thank you for your incredible feedback! We appreciate so much you have enjoyed the game! We know, we’re working to continue the Marta’s story with her parents, so stay tuned for more updates and news! Thank you to give us your support as a dad, your point of view makes a lot for our team! 
We had only 10 days to work on music and SFXs and it wasn’t easy for us, we are projecting to put more sounds and musics! 

The team ;)

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TinySquidStudiosSubmitted357 days ago(+1)

Wow!! I'm very impressed with your game. The story is conveyed beautifully and it gets quite emotional. I loved the 3D background environment and the 2D world and style was lovely, but I wished there were some small interactions between the two. The music was also perfect, good job!

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Welding
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GanjochefDeveloper357 days ago(+1)

Thank you little squid boy for your feedback! We appreciate you had fun with our game, we're working to continue the development, stay tuend for other new and versions! ;)

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DplusTSubmitted358 days ago (1 edit) (+1)

Beautiful game, I love the aesthetic. It really pulled on my heartstrings at the end :'(

My only minor criticism would be that the black text can be somewhat hard to read at times when it's in front of darker things like the purple flowers in the background. 

Overall though it's such a beautiful and touching game! I'd love to see more of it. Excellent work!

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Split-Bot
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GanjochefDeveloper358 days ago

Thank you for the feedback, today we've uploaded a new version of the game with contains some corrections, in particular on the text. Stay tuned for other news ;) 

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JzagoracSubmitted358 days ago(+1)

Love the style of the game, so cute and comfy, hope everything works out for marta in the end. Good job!

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Realm Bender
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GanjochefDeveloper358 days ago

Thank you so much! Stay tuned if you want to discover the destiny of Marta, we're working to continue the development of the game! ;)

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GetSkyGamesSubmitted359 days ago(+1)

I love this kind of graphics. The game came out nice and positive.
Congratulations!

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Circulation
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GanjochefDeveloper359 days ago(+1)

Thank you so much, we’ve worked a lot to make the gaming experience as good as possible! ☺️

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ExplosiveChairSubmitted359 days ago(+2)

This game's absolutely adorable! I love the hand-drawn paper aesthetic! Hope everything works out for Marta and her parents 

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The Interdimensional Mage
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GanjochefDeveloper359 days ago

Thank you so much, we appreciate you’ve enjoyed the game! We’re working to continue the story and the game! Stay tuned 🤗

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ryaredSubmitted359 days ago(+2)

Super cute aesthetics and animations! Really good atmosphere, music and SFx. Story (so far) :'c

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Heartbeat
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GanjochefDeveloper359 days ago(+1)

thank you for your feedback,  we’re working to continue the development of the game, stay tuned 😉

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kehtehskySubmitted360 days ago(+3)

Wow, love the art style! It's so charming and enjoyable. c:

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Frecko's Adventures
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GanjochefDeveloper360 days ago(+2)

Thank you so much, we appreciate you've enjoyed the game! We're working to continue the development of the game, stay tuned for other news ;)

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ThraccoSubmitted360 days ago(+2)

i love this!!! So cute ^^

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A dog's life ( Jam version )
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Romp of OttersSubmitted360 days ago(+2)

Such a nice game! An amazing artstyle. One of the cutest game I have seen here!

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Dinomension
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GanjochefDeveloper360 days ago(+1)

Thank you for your feedback, we appreciate that you loved the game! Stay tuned for future updates, we're working all together to continue the develop of the game, if you want follow us for some news ;)

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PixeLSubmitted361 days ago(+2)

I really love the graphics and mechanics! Beautiful game!

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LeafySouls
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GanjochefDeveloper361 days ago(+1)

Thank you from the team, we’re working to continue the game, follow us and stay tuned if you’re interested 🤗

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Professor BlueSubmitted361 days ago(+2)

I love the graphics. It really encapsulates the creativity of children, especially the willingness to draw on anything (looking at the graph paper on the floor there).

I am invested in what happens next!


The sounds are a bit clunky, but I know getting good sound effects can be hard in such a short time.

GG!

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Inter-dimensional mingling
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GanjochefDeveloper361 days ago(+2)

Thank you so much for your feedback! As a team we’re working to fix and make the game better than the first version we uploaded for the jam.
We appreciate that you had fun with our game, stay tuned for updates 😉

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ironcutter24Submitted362 days ago(+2)

Really captivating atmosphere and I liked a lot the graphics with 2D drawings in 3D space, but I couldn't get the mouse to work so I'm stuck right after the beginning, with a bunch of snow balls I can't throw :c

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Afterimage
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GanjochefDeveloper362 days ago(+1)

We appreciate that you had fun with our game, you needed to click on the snowball in the inventory and after click to throw them against the father 🧐

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ironcutter24Submitted361 days ago(+1)

Thanks! I really liked the story and general mood. I think mentioning that you need to select items in the tips would help a lot, and maybe also improving the readability of the text with an outline or colored text box.

Overall I enjoyed my time and it's a really nice game. Keep up the good job!

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GanjochefDeveloper361 days ago

Thank you for your feedback, we’re working to fix and make the game better than the first version we uploaded for the jam, stay tuned for updates 🤗

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SJ Jason LiuSubmitted362 days ago(+2)

The story is great and music is so beautiful.

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Eve's Dimensions
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GanjochefDeveloper362 days ago(+1)

Thank you from the entire team :)

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