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A jam entry

اليتيم the orphinView game page »

War , Mother , Father , Zanga , Tako , game of the year , stick man , Missile , Touch on the right time
Submitted by SuperFalafel, TareqGhobar with 26 minutes, 16 seconds before the deadline

Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw score
Sound - الصوتيات#33.7143.714
Innovation - الابداع#73.5713.571
Overall - التقييم عام#93.3573.357
Theme - استخدام موضوع الزنقة#113.5003.500
Overall#113.2263.226
Fun Factor - عامل التسلية#252.3572.357
Graphics/Visuals - المرئيات/الجرافيكس#252.8572.857

Ranked from 14 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Game Engine Name:
Unity

Team Name, if you have any
Super Falfel

Who worked on this game? (Name List)
Tareq Ghobar and Marwan Mahjoob

If you used any Game Assets not done by your team, Must be Listed here:
The explosion pop up in editor and build but not on the website dunno why well we used an explosion from unity asset store
explosions sound by freesound.org

Comments

josephshomali · 1 year ago

You guys explained the 'philosophy' behind the game, and it's nice as a philosophy. The execution, however, is far from delivering the message. You focused on the words, and did not commit to gameplay - remember if people do not enjoy the gameplay they won't stick long enough to get the message :)

Knowing the team, I know you can do better in the future - remember again, focus on the gameplay ;)

Great stuff!

Jaffar Salih · 1 year ago

you should focus more on designing game mechanics that support story telling rather than just using what is easy. push yourselves a little bit more and im sure you'll improve. try to look at other games that focus on storytelling and see what kind gameplay they deliver.

Jemimaru · 1 year ago

بالنسبة لي اشوف ان هذه مقدمة للعبة و تحمست اشوف الباقي و تفاجأت انه خلص في اقل من 5 ثواني

ما اشوف ان هذه قصة بل اشوف انها رسالة

المشكلة ان الرسالة موجهة لكسب العاطفة و هذه الشي قد يلهي البعض عن التحكيم بموضوعية

ما امانع من القصص العاطفية و اسلوب السرد لكن لازم يكون في محتوى يدعم

Homam Bahnassi · 1 year ago

بغض النظر عن قواعد اللعبة البسيطة المبنية على اللعبة الشهيرة Space Invaders، إلا أنها أثرت فيني جداً بالقصة والموسيقى واستطاعت أن توصل رسالتها. اللعبة بحاجة للمزيد من العمل لاتمامها. أتمنى أن أراها لعبة كاملة ان شاء الله.

Indie Saudi · 1 year ago

its a great simple game with a simple purpose, I wonder how many messages can you deliver sixth such simple mechanics.

I liked it

thanks everyone I really appreciate it.

Danar Kayfi · 1 year ago

لعبة هادفة وفيها فكرة جميلة :) ما بعرف اذا ممكن يكون فيها مجال لمراحل اكثر
بالتوفيق

فكرة جدا رائعة و موضوع مهم ,, الى الامام

i like the idea

Yasser Jaffal · 1 year ago

فكرة بسيطة ولعبة لطيفة توصل الفكرة بسرعة، كنت أتمنى أن يكون المحتوى أكبر، مراحل أكثر ومقولات أكثر لكن لا بأس كبداية

thanks for everyone to share their feedback and I will go and play ur games right now :D

لعبة بسيطة وفكرة جميل إيصالها من خلال الآلعاب، استخدام موفق للثيم، غير منطقي بعض الشئ

its wonderful game good job

good lock

check out our game too and tell us what do you think and rate ours

لعبه رائعه وصلتو الفكره بالكلمات والصوت

ولعبتنا شبيهه بالعبتكم واحنا اوصلناها بالصوره

من وجهه المصادفه ان تجد لعبه بنفس مبدأ لعبه حدا عاملها

لكن نجحتو اكتر منا

معا لهدف واحد :)


اتوقع ان يكون هناك جمل اكثر مؤثره في المستقبل و تعبر مثل ما عبرت هذه الجمله و ان يكون هناك مراحل

و بالتوفيق :)

nice game ,, Rate our game

Loved the fact that you tried to send a message with your game, as mentioned before it's fun and the visuals are great , i just with it was a bit longer ^_^ , Best of luck guys!

the game was awesome , the sounds and graphics looked nice but it was really really short :( just when we started to have fun it ends , hope we will see longer versions of it in the future inschalah who knows , good luck guys

thank you mugmugchan , I appreciate that you played our game , we didn't think about making some more levels cause we live in time that filled of killers and as we all know world war 3 is coming so we come up with this idea, we wanted to use some ideas of the world war 2 to put in the game but meh we didn't catch up with the time well.

I will go and play your game :#

i really liked the concept of game and the music but the game is very VERY short, it would be better if you made it longer not just one scene.

but anyway keep up the good work!

check out our game too ,, we would like to see your feedback! :D

Thank you

i llike the game !! great job :p

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