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A jam submission

Secret Moon ShardsView game page

Shoot shard, and teleport to location. Kill enemies by teleporting through them.
Submitted by Johnonym (@ReitGames) — 4 days, 16 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Innovation#433.5933.593
Gameplay#603.4813.481
Overall#1093.2593.259
Graphics#1483.1853.185
Theme interpretation#1802.9632.963
Audio#1802.8522.852

Ranked from 27 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

GitHub repository URL
https://github.com/johnedvard/SecretMoonShards

Theme interpretation
Shooting a moon shard, and gain the ability to teleport to it, killing all enemies in the path.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

Great idea, I really enjoyed playing it!

As feedback: did you consider making the Moon sharp go through enemies? It's kind of hard to kill them aiming to intercept their future position.

Keep working on it, it has a lot of potential!

Developer(+1)

Thank you for your feedback. It is really appreciated. I never thought about letting the shard pass through enemies. It is worth experimenting with it a bit at least, thanks.

Submitted(+1)

Great realization of mechanic, really liked to use this throwing-teleporting feature :D 

Developer(+1)

Thanks for playing. I appreciate the comment. The game itself is still very much incomplete, but I am happy you enjoyed the main mechanic. It makes me want to continue on it. Cheers~

Submitted

It definitely has great potential

Submitted(+1)

The game play and controls are really nice. Surprisingly intuitive. 

A few things I would upgrade (and you might already be planning):

-  Some indication that/where you can fall down. 

- Adding health that is decreased whenever you run into one of the enemies.

- Add some objective (e.g. things to find, like the "sectet")

Keep at it and this will become a great game.

Developer

Thanks for playing, and thank you for the feedback. It is greatly appreciated.

Submitted(+1)

Ouch my ears :( The sound effects are so much louder than the background, I had my volume turned way up with headphone to listen to the background track, would be nice if you balanced it a little better.

The visuals are fantastic! I loved the 1 bit art and the character seemed to have personality just by the way they looked. That's a sign of really good character design in my opinion, great work!

The shoot and teleport mechanic was fun as well. Would love to see more levels and challenges with this mechanic. And maybe a story for our main character too! Hope you keep working on this, there's a lot of potential here for a really good and popular game.

Developer

Thank you for playing. Yes, the sound balance is very much off, thanks for the feedback. I definitely need to fix that.

The graphics are not mine (except for the shard and trails), so I cannot take credit for that. It was made by CanariGames

I am happy you like the mechanic. With feedback like yours, I get more motivated to work on the game and make it better. Thanks for the kind words.

Submitted(+1)

Agree with everyone here, I really like the fluid animations and minimalistic art. Despite it being WIP, the game itself has a lot of its core identity. I never realized that my trailing effect could damage enemies until the level where the enemy was blocking my path. That was a very good design choice. I think it can be refined a bit as the enemy vibrates back and forth between the walls. Otherwise, great job! I look forward to seeing where you will take these mechanics.

Developer

Thank you for the kind words. I get extra motivated to continue when people think the core mechanic is interesting. The current state of the game is still a “proof of concept” if I can call it that :P

Submitted(+1)

It took me a few tries to learn the controls, but once I found left-click places the teleportation target then moving the character became a lot fun and it's really cool how you can knock out enemies as you teleport!

Submitted(+1)

Very, very intriguing weapon-throw to teleport and kill game mechanic! Lots of potential here.

Submitted(+1)

I wish there was more to the game, although I understand that the game is still in progress. I think the mechanic of defeating enemies by lining up yourself and the shard between them and then teleporting is pretty cool and unique. Not sure I've ever seen something like that before so I'd love to see this game expand more on that. Nice job!

Developer(+1)

Thank you for the feedback. I am really happy that you like the mechanic. The execution of it could definitely be better and improved upon. Comments like yours give me extra motivation to continue on the idea, and create something better, thank you.

Submitted(+1)

I LOVE the minimal design! The gameplay is fun and now I want more and more challenging levels :D Good Work.

Developer(+1)

Thank you for the kind words. The game is more of a prototype in its current state. It needs a lot of love and attention to make it better.

(+1)

Nice game with an interesting mechanics. Sadly a bit buggy and a black screen after some levels. With some more polishing, it could be an excellent full release title.

Developer

Thanks for the comment. Yes, it is quite buggy, and I only created five levels. I am glad you see potential in it. It was one of my objectives to use this game jam as a platform to get some feedback on the mechanics.

Submitted(+1)

I like the way to attack&move! very innovative and simple yet fun! Though my game get stuck after certain levels(I don't know which one, the one with a bunch of walls.) I'd love to see more levels of it!

Developer(+1)

Thanks for playing, and thanks for the kind words. I was only able to create five levels, so the one with all the walls is the last one. If I put more effort into the game, I could hopefully create more interesting levels. Maybe next time.

Submitted(+1)

Could not hear music (Mac Catalina 10.15.17). Teleporation neat idea, took me a few times to get it down. Ended up the void but certainly enjoyed trying it:)

Developer

Thanks for playing. Yes, there are a lot of bugs in this game :P I created it mostly to learn more about Unity, and also prototype the game mechanic. Thank you for the kind words.

Submitted(+1)

Cool mechanic! A bit easy since you can sometimes just teleport to the end, and I did manage to get stuck in a wall.

I like the feel of the grapichs and music, they fit nicley with each other. A bit of an eerie feeling!